Game of thrones: The Red lion

The overall story is good but there are some grammatical mistakes,and the update stability is not proper also the story needs some serious consideration. I like to request the author to take time and write the story. And try to improve the storytelling also check the past mistakes in the chapters. thanks 🙏

Grammarly bro, it’s free and it would make this readable. ……

The grammar is a detractor the way the writer writes has no real immersion it's more like some guy off the street with no real understand of cadence is telling the story. overall its needs a serious consideration on the tone it wants to set in order for readers to immerse themselves in something believable.

Lowkey wish it had a better update speed but broskie got his own life , but I def recommend. This has the potential to be one of the real good and enjoyable fanfics on this app .

Fantastic story and characters but the update stability is not good. Overall the story is perfect ................................ Thanks for this great fanfiction 😄

A great story with a perfect mc. I like how you are building the main character from his birth. This is quite interesting to see him grow. Also I like that you born him into House Lannister that makes the story fantastic 😍😍

Very good:) ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................