Beautiful, actually better written than many successful authors I've read from. While Jerald may have had a hand in that, it doesn't discredit the amazing work you've put in. There are literally only 2 things I would change, letting us know who's POV we switched with a sub-header, and letting us know when timeskips happens, other than than, perfect
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Jumana_Asim
This book was such a gripping read!! I found it to be very well paced and every couple of paragraphs left me with an urge to keep reading. I also really appreciate how the ending entails a smooth foreshadowing of the next book- can't wait to see how it plays out. Plus, the writing style reminded me of one of our favourite series- if you know you know ;) . Overall, it was an amazing story that I thoroughly enjoyed!!
Beautiful, actually better written than many successful authors I've read from. While Jerald may have had a hand in that, it doesn't discredit the amazing work you've put in. There are literally only 2 things I would change, letting us know who's POV we switched with a sub-header, and letting us know when timeskips happens, other than than, perfect
This book was such a gripping read!! I found it to be very well paced and every couple of paragraphs left me with an urge to keep reading. I also really appreciate how the ending entails a smooth foreshadowing of the next book- can't wait to see how it plays out. Plus, the writing style reminded me of one of our favourite series- if you know you know ;) . Overall, it was an amazing story that I thoroughly enjoyed!!