In a world where cultivation dominates above the heavens, across the earth, and beneath its surface, a singular being is born. His name, Long Shen, carries the weight of the world's destiny, and his very body upholds its delicate balance. Gifted with the System of Equilibrium, he embarks on a journey to uncover the truth behind his existence. Along the way, he will face trials that test the limits of his power, challenge the fabric of reality, and reveal secrets that could reshape the fate of all creation.

Peak of immortality

ACTION

ADVENTURE

SYSTEM

MYSTERY

CULTIVATION

GENIUS

ANTIHERO

Hi, from now, I will publish twice a week because Im a bit overcharged. Thanks of your compréhension. The chapters 1,2 and 3 are the begins of a story of an average 300-400.

Hi, it is my fist Light novel, I Know it can seem bad but I think this novel has potential. it is about a powerful MC but who don't follow the stereotype of cultivation's MC. Good reading

In my career I never red such a shitty story it is ass nothing is comprehensible Its shit i hate it so much it ruined m’y Life I hate you so much I will kym after reading this m’y family hate me because of you I lost 6 month to read this bullshit I hate m’y Life so much because of you it is incredible how someone can product such a shitty story I hate everything



I read this shit and I became very autistic. All the story is pure bullshit. It’s for people who need a fuckng life and have no friend. Don’t read this novel if you want to live a happy life, after read this my life. 

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