Hellborn: The Rise of the Demon Sovereign
Alan Yokob was a name feared in the underworld—a ruthless hitman, a ghost in the night. But even ghosts can be hunted, and he is also hunted by his enemies. However, his story did not end here. Because death was not the end.
When he opened his eyes, he was no longer on Earth. Instead, he found himself in another world known as Kirath, a world once saved from destruction, now rotting under the weight of human greed. A thousand years had passed since the fall of the Demon King, and without darkness to balance the light, mankind had spiraled into chaos—warring, polluting, and forgetting the gods who once protected them.
Alan was not reborn as a hero. He was brought here as a harbinger of vengeance. Not to save Kirath, but to punish it. His mission is clear: raise the demons, restore the balance, and remind humanity of the fear they have long abandoned.
They thought they had escaped the darkness.
They were wrong.
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