Transmigration: Into the Life of Severus Snape

I'm quite surprised by this story. At the moment, the system isn't one that enslaves users. The MC is aware of what he has, what he needs, and what he seeks. The relationships between the characters haven't been explored much, but the basis is there. So the story is fluid enough. My problem is the number of chapters, lol. There could be a thousand chapters to satisfy my addiction. I've read a few variations of fanfics with Severus Snape and most of them are disappointing. There's one that's quite interesting, since an archmage from another world takes over Severus' body. The problem with this story is that it includes dimensional and super-powered demons, giving the MC a crisis. What I expect from a Harry Potter fanfic is an exploration of the world as it's narrated. A conflict with Muggles, maybe a way for everyone to become wizards and become a cosmic civilization. Something within the scope of the story. Not the emergence of extradimensional demons, gods or any other crap that escalates the level of danger of this world to the levels of MVU, DC, Dragon Ball, ... Another variation is the depression pattern, where the MC has the 'affective memory' of Lily and runs after her like a drug addict. And the pattern of following the Dark Lord. I have high expectations this time, let's follow.

great............. please keep on and do not drop this, it is wonderful

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Great Story! Please continue!........................................................................................................................

İyi şimdiye kadar hiç bir problem olmadı çok iyi gidiyor. bu kadar geç keşfetmeme şaşırıyorum. Ana hikayeye karışmadan sadece sevdiklerini koruyarak ilerlerse daha iyi olur.

Well without a doubt the world of HP is something very exploitable, interpreting Snape is nothing new, but each author gives a new perspective, I have read 1/3 of the current chapters and although it is a good novel in terms of writing, its development leaves things to be desired, I feel that it is rushing all the time, perhaps seeking to reach the beginning of the canon? I think it should focus on developing more these years before, on the other hand there are some conversations that feel empty and some actions as well, on the other hand, the fact that a DeuxMachine is as clear as what the author did with the legacy "Shaqif" and then the assistant "Eva" and finally the "rewards", all this makes me think that the novel will focus on fulfilling all the wishes of the MC without any setbacks, which will make this novel boring, of course this is just my opinion and if after catching up this has changed I will rewrite this, I hope the author continues to develop this world more.

Good fanfic, sometimes the POV repetitions can be a nuance but at least you get to read about the other people feelings, so is not the worse. Anyway, it's an excelent fanfic. Worth your time!

Please update more chapters... One of the best Harry Potter fanfictions out there...

There are not many Harry Potter fanfictions of James and Lily's timeline. It's good novel. Keep updating plz[img=update][img=update][img=update]

if u are looking for New Harry Potter fanfiction -THIS IS HIGHLY RECOMMENDED i thought this Will be like the routine hp stories But this is different ..... 👏👏👏👏 author

me gusta mucho que no se quedara solo con gran brataña es algo muy raro que los fanfic siempre se quejan de querer estar lejos de la guerra y otras cosas que saben que van a pasar en gran bretaña pero nunca esquivan la bala para que todo pase como se suponia ver otras escuelas o partes del mundo seria interesante como una maestria en Mahoutokoro siempre dicen que la magia alli es diferente me imagino algo tiempo pociones se convierte en alquimia y aprende a hacer pastillas como las novelas chinas sigue la novela plis me gusta mucho tu enfoque de ir a otro pais lejos de toda esa maraña politica e incomoda es algo diferente de ver, seria interesante alguna aventura o paseo por algun lugar magico y algun tipo de relacion amorosa cuando regrese con ella y camine por el callejos me imagino lo cara de Lily

Hey Author I just wanted to make sure. Is this the same story that Neville’s mother and snape got together or was that another fanfic?

It was a enjoyable read so far but I have some constructive criticism though. It's pretty clear that the author is using AI to assist writing the story, a few signs I picked up on was the constant "It's a new beginning" or "He would his write story" statements at the end of multiple chapters. I honestly don't mind AI especially if it's used to assist with grammar or translations but AI has some serious flaws when it comes to writing stories on its own. Another thing, the use of multiple POVs in one chapter is kinda insane, I get maybe one or two but 4 POVs in one chapter is kinda insane and it's the different POVs rehashing the same thing that makes it distracting and confusing. And the last thing, as a reader I feel like a slower pace and flow might have fitted the story better. With that being said, writing isn't easy so i appreciate the author writing this story and hope to see you continue to improve.

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