Guide To Surviving Inside a Horror Game
Iris one day finds herself inside the horror game she had been playing for the past years.
In this game, humans can evolve into greater beings through playing life and death games.
Filled with mysteries, this realm will eventually come to an end by the hands of the enigmatic entity itself!
At first, Iris just wanted to live and survive in this world, but as nostalgia and affection for this game grew in her heart, Iris changes her mind and decided that she will save this world from destruction.
The only problem is that most of the characters she is familiar with had all already fallen into madness and all of her foes are deranged people!
Will Iris be able to survive and save everyone, or will she succumbed to madness and lose herself in this crazy world?
Writing Quality is decent, but needs grammar and structure improvement. Story Development is interesting premise, but still early to judge the pacing Character Design : MC has a clear goal, but needs more depth World Background : hmm... a horror game world with evolution mechanics is promising
I like how you're putting the FL in a really tough predicament,,, and good enough gruesome seems for a horror story. though I wish you would go even darker and crazier,,,,, Though there's only 3 chaps for now, upload,,,more dear author,,,
All say it out loud. This story shows promise, definitely! I'd work on the grammar and revise the chapter before releasing them, because I found one or two typos that almost got me off the meaning of the sentence. Keep reading and keep improving, miss! I'm sure this novel will go places ^^ I'll be following this story very closely for as long as I can. Promise ^^