Threads Of Fate.

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Okay, honest review. The first few chapters really brought me in and kept me on the edge of my seat, but it got dragged on. The characters kept saying the same thing over and over again— at first it was fun because of the mystery, but it got repeated to the point that it was frustrating. The writing quality is fire though! The author made sure to keep everything light and easy to understand for the reader. The character designs, too. If you're a mystery reader who loves getting edge with the cliffhangers then this is for you!

to be honest , l just read few chapters, and it's quite alright , the character design is ok only repeated words but the rest is fine .

The descriptions of the characters' emotions, backgrounds, and surroundings make everything feel very real. The fantasy elements are extremely vivid, and it is easy to become immersed in the story. I also enjoy the author's brief notes at the end of each chapter.

A truly magical and enchanting story that will transport you to another world. I am absolutely loving it!

I enkoyed the story, the character is likable and the development and tension is good. Not that it is a bad thing, but based on certain patterns , it seems sometimes very obvious the chapters have been edited by a software that starts with G and end T. But it still feels like the story is an original work. I don’t see as checking your grammar with software like that a problem . I would personally prefer some larger moments of breathing between tension. Sometimes it gives vibes of a battle series. One thing after another with no room to sit back and take it all in. I recommend it.

Honestly the book is really good, I like the way the book us going but it does gat a bit repetitive in the later chapters combined with how short some of the chapter are it doesn't do the plot justice. Regardless, I think the book is well made, character, from Liam to Noah to the MC, they all have their own intrigue, the novel is interesting and I would recommend it for romance and mystery readers

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So, I've read up to what only has been released so far which is chapter 20. And I'm not much or at all of a romance person. But I can say I enjoyed this for it's descriptive explanations when its going over the background and how the characters feel and their surroundings. I definitely enjoyed the discrepancy of it. It felt as if this was happening in real life as I was reading this. So the imagination and fantasy is definitely there. Which it on its own is amazing, because it shows that I was immersed into the story. I love how you write at the end of the chapter on the author's thoughts about the summary of each chapter going on. One thing I do wish though, was that some parts of the story would be more fast paced. It felt fast paced for the first five chapters of the story and then it felt as if it dropped for a portion of it. But that's my own preference. But for the most part the characters are adept and seemingly real in their emotions and how they act.