The Mistress' Revenge

First and foremost, grammatical mistakes are miniscule if any. Second of all, consistency of updates and seems like author will not be given up on story anytime soon. It's a unique book and a rare kind to be found on webnovel. Not many book written by a female author with a female protag in a male body. While it feels like a basic fantasy template at first, it isn't any of that sort. While names are similar, magic system and fantasy world is completely unique to the book. I hope to see author and book shine more and improve.

The protagonist has a strong, relatable voice, making even the simplest moments entertaining. The setup feels fresh, blending modern struggles with an intriguing mystery that leaves you wanting more. The writing style is witty and immersive, with a perfect balance of humor and intrigue. While the pacing could be a bit tighter, it’s a strong opening that sets the stage for something unique. Definitely worth checking out! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5/5)

Grammer is Good. It's a new story so I don't have much to say. The start was both good and bad, with the shimmering lust already present in the first 10 chapters but I couldn't drop the book because of its potential. I love to see the author realise the books full potential in future.

I love the characters, they are so relatable, especially Jane, obviously. Everything she says is so damn real and I love the non filtered thoughts lol. Thanks for putting in so much effort in updating the story. Totally worth my time. Looking forward to the updates[img=recommend]

Hi, it's the author here! Reviews should be genuine. So, here is one! This story is about lots of things. It's about magic, lust, betrayal, friendship and family but more so it's about individual existence. You will find an MC who has so many powers but no idea how to use them. You will come across a character who has all the knowledge of three realms but no strength and integrity. You will also read about a power-crazed woman who tries to overshadow her shortcomings with passionate sex. There will be weird quests. Some you will like. Some you will hate. I might kill some of your favourite characters too. Don't hate me. Life is unfair, so is this book. But what I do ensure you is, you will have a great time. You will hate some characters and you will do so passionately. You will feel bad for some, and you will do that with all you have. This book is about feeling all sorts of things. Mind you, it has its own flaws. But it would be bad marketing if I tell you all of it now. I will leave it up to you to decide. At the end of the day, this is a story. So, have fun reading.

When I learnt the shanaya is trying her hand at writing a webnovel, I couldn't help but try it out. I mean, she usually writes small 50 to 60 page books on her name with varying topics. I think this is her first try at writing a long content book and with fantasy elements. As an old fan of her books who found her randomly, I am a bit baised but I would absolutely recommend people to try the book atleast. I am sure it will be a breath of fresh air compared to the usual on this platform. Go girl! Keep writing.

Writing: The quality of writing is good, consistent and with its own flair. A few hiccups and typos, but nothing that would break the immersion. Overall its pretty decent and feels like it would be polished even more over time. Updates: So far the updates have been consistent and the chapter length does not wary over the updates which is a plus. consistency is good. Story: A bit confusing in the start, especially since we start with the Girl's POV while the summary mentions it to be a MALE MC story, but give it a few chapters for the mystery and plot to settle in. Gets better and intriguing Character design: My comments over the various chapters will display how I feel about this. If you can make a reader hate your characters based on their interactions, that means a good job. World Background: This seems almost good, but could be better. Or rather I would say, the way its been put out for the readers needs a little more explanation. But maybe more will be explained as I read further. Overall: A good story so far, definitely worth a read. Score: 4.9

I loved the characters and especially the protagonist, the way you wrote it is pretty amazing, and I haven't seen any grammatical errors I've read so far. I'm excited to see how it goes as I read through more chapters and I'm wishing you all the best with the story! Keep up the good work!

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A nicely written romance fantasy, with enough mystery surrounding the characters that I just might stick around to see what happens further. Good job and keep updating!