reborn as a failed experiment, will this be his downfall or a boon that will push him towards being an apex, follow lime as he grows from a mere chimera slime to a formidable beast
shamless author review
it's my first attempt to actually write a novel I've always had ideas and I chose one that can be goofy unlike most of mine which have dark themselves this is mostly a trial so I can take experience and be better for my real project but I will still give this my all i will try to be as active as possible
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kappe
Okay, let me give you a detailed review. the writing quality is amazing, it's too young to judge the story development. but so far yhe way of the slow development is pretty good. the few chapters for world background were present nice and its appreciated.
Updating stability needs to be a little worked on
shamless author review it's my first attempt to actually write a novel I've always had ideas and I chose one that can be goofy unlike most of mine which have dark themselves this is mostly a trial so I can take experience and be better for my real project but I will still give this my all i will try to be as active as possible
Okay, let me give you a detailed review. the writing quality is amazing, it's too young to judge the story development. but so far yhe way of the slow development is pretty good. the few chapters for world background were present nice and its appreciated. Updating stability needs to be a little worked on