From Reject to Legend

Plz don’t drop its a very good story

Alright, it's been a long time since I wrote a review, but I decided to write one after reading your last chp. I have read a lot of football fics both good and bad and I'm an avid football fan myself, heck I'm even working on a football ff rn (though it's a translation) and based on that I can tell you you're doing a good job so far, but there are places you could improve in my opinion, romance is good and all but make sure you don't let it be the main point of your book, it should be there once in a while, also the subheadings you use at time mid chapter like; "Minute 56", "La Liga new season" could be avoided I don't know about other but personally it ruins my immersion a bit. Another main thing is it's a bit fast-paced, like I'm not saying the mc should be nerfed or anything but take the plot more slowly your matches while they're nice, they just feel like summarization at times, mind you this isn't a bad thing but this should only be used for low end fixtures or when you need to speed things up, but big matches should be fleshed out more. I don’t know how many chapters you have in mind for this book, but you certainly need to slow the plot down a bit to make the book more immersive imo. Also, even though he has Kroos and Nedved ability don’t make him win the B'dor in his first season. Trust me, it'll make the coming plots a bit redundant. There are countless other awards that can showcase his talent for the time being. I think that's all I have to say. Best of luck on your endeavour in this work because it is truly a good book. Have a nice day.

Story created by a real author, I would give it 5 stars just for that, but the author destroys his story by letting himself be eaten up by criticism and negative opinions. The story is about to be abandoned and the fans of the first hour are disappointed.

Dude, you have a lot of talent. Each character has their own characterization, not a faceless person. Best football fanfic. Finally written by someone who is really into it and lives in the culture. As far as I'm concerned, if you make an OP character, see it through to the end, don't diminish his power, just give him challenges that really matter.

5 stars just because you deserve it. Although the beginning is rushed and the romance was axed halfway, you have continued to improve and deliver quality content. I’m honestly feeling like telling you to quit despite wanting more, as this is not healthy to deal with toxic people with no lives. and they somehow have enough time to waste always(Dunno how they survive without working honestly )

Just read your rant about the reviews and whatnot and it is really eye opening for me that people would go to such lengths just because your story is not to their taste. I hope that you will keep ignoring those negative things they have to say about the story and yourself, keep doing what you are doing and thank you for sharing this wonderful story that you have worked hard on. All love from a reader.

This is my first time writing a review, but I liked this story about football. Thank you to the author for the story, and I wish you creative success. Keep up the good work.👍✊🙌

just the fact that it is not a translation with some Chinese d-riding imma rate this 5 stars

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it's great, but you are making him too op

I wanted to ask you, my friend, how do I publish a novel on Web Novel? And keep downloading I want you to seriously consider creating a novel where the hero buys a club or something like that. Thank you.

Let's Goooo, I'm so glad u decided to come back bro! keep being you and ignore the haters, I look forward to the next chapters with great anticipation!

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I’m giving it a 5 star already as my country PORTUGAL is finally mentioned. 🇵🇹❤️