From Reject to Legend

Dude, you have a lot of talent. Each character has their own characterization, not a faceless person. Best football fanfic. Finally written by someone who is really into it and lives in the culture. As far as I'm concerned, if you make an OP character, see it through to the end, don't diminish his power, just give him challenges that really matter.

Though the romance pissed me off this book is one of the best football fanfics on this shitty app i recommend not to look at the reviews and jst fckin enjoy the work ♥️♥️♥️♥️

Damn! I forgot to leave a review before! So here it goes, I'll give my honest thoughts. The earlier chapters needed work, and it was rewritten, but I'd say the story evolved more after the first season with Malaga. The newer chapters after the Patreon announcement is just 🔥🔥 Even the romance, which the author himself said was the issue, got improved after Adriano met the final girlfriend. They are perfect and not forced, and it makes sense. The realism is another thing that is amazing. Unlike the other wish fulfillment story, despite being op, the author uses other things to balance it out, and shows the troubles of youth. Mc is not perfect, but he's growing to be one. All in all, if you love a Football story, this is the best you'll find here.

Plz don’t drop its a very good story

Alright, it's been a long time since I wrote a review, but I decided to write one after reading your last chp. I have read a lot of football fics both good and bad and I'm an avid football fan myself, heck I'm even working on a football ff rn (though it's a translation) and based on that I can tell you you're doing a good job so far, but there are places you could improve in my opinion, romance is good and all but make sure you don't let it be the main point of your book, it should be there once in a while, also the subheadings you use at time mid chapter like; "Minute 56", "La Liga new season" could be avoided I don't know about other but personally it ruins my immersion a bit. Another main thing is it's a bit fast-paced, like I'm not saying the mc should be nerfed or anything but take the plot more slowly your matches while they're nice, they just feel like summarization at times, mind you this isn't a bad thing but this should only be used for low end fixtures or when you need to speed things up, but big matches should be fleshed out more. I don’t know how many chapters you have in mind for this book, but you certainly need to slow the plot down a bit to make the book more immersive imo. Also, even though he has Kroos and Nedved ability don’t make him win the B'dor in his first season. Trust me, it'll make the coming plots a bit redundant. There are countless other awards that can showcase his talent for the time being. I think that's all I have to say. Best of luck on your endeavour in this work because it is truly a good book. Have a nice day.

Story created by a real author, I would give it 5 stars just for that, but the author destroys his story by letting himself be eaten up by criticism and negative opinions. The story is about to be abandoned and the fans of the first hour are disappointed.

5 stars just because you deserve it. Although the beginning is rushed and the romance was axed halfway, you have continued to improve and deliver quality content. I’m honestly feeling like telling you to quit despite wanting more, as this is not healthy to deal with toxic people with no lives. and they somehow have enough time to waste always(Dunno how they survive without working honestly )

I gave this a try because I heard quite a bit about it and I know the author has received quite a lot of criticism about it but this is my honest thought on the story... it started off great and the narration felt smooth and friendly but also detailed but as the story progressed it became robotic as though it's being written by an AI... the Author talked about being realistic but there's none of that. I understand he received Tony Kroos' template but how can one player stand against teams like Barca and Real Madrid that are filled with superstars. I mean let's say he had Messi and Ronaldo's template at their peak... he is still one player... but still i think the biggest mistake the author made was listening to people's criticisms then adjusting the story to their likings. and lastly you could use more than one chapter to write about the matches and makes them more enjoyable. these just feel like reports someone read on the internet when they miss a match.

Just read your rant about the reviews and whatnot and it is really eye opening for me that people would go to such lengths just because your story is not to their taste. I hope that you will keep ignoring those negative things they have to say about the story and yourself, keep doing what you are doing and thank you for sharing this wonderful story that you have worked hard on. All love from a reader.

This is my first time writing a review, but I liked this story about football. Thank you to the author for the story, and I wish you creative success. Keep up the good work.👍✊🙌

just the fact that it is not a translation with some Chinese d-riding imma rate this 5 stars

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it's great, but you are making him too op

Best football novel I have read yet on this site, really great, love all the slice of life as well keep up this splendid job! Kate is just a keeper!

Another long review. I liked the fact this is original fanfic, so that's a bonus. The author rushed the beginning but it was already mentioned, so won't say much. The mc is pretty well written, specially the family and his personal life. I genuinely liked the idea that characters have their own personality. Since it's Au , that's also a good way to connect the changes. But Mc became too op too fast. It's hard to nerf such a player with Toni Kroos, Nedeved and Pele! First 2 romances are are about character development, and I honestly think author should have just ignored the trolls and wrote his story, rather than trying to change it. Also he gave up halfway then came back, so that's a negative, but I kinda understand the reasoning. But it's Webnovel, you have to accept the good with the bad. Some of the things are kinda wish fulfillment, so that was another issue. But atleast he made it up with the other things in the new chapters. The new romance was well executed, so that's a plus. Also saw the personal issues with the other author, and can't say I don't blame him since there were some evidence. But rather than looking at the bad thinga, maybe focus on your own story. A solid 4 star , would have given more if not for the issues.