From Reject to Legend
A modern-day guy recieves a visit from Truck Kun, and wakes up as Adriano Riveiro, a 17-year-old football prodigy from Portugal who got released from La Masia due to a career-threatening injury, right before the end of the 2011-12 season about a year ago.
He then spent a year recovering, but he was told he could never play again. He ended his life in depression, and MC took over after that.
Upon awakening, he received a system and a starter pack: the full skills and physical attributes of Toni Kroos and Pavel Nedved.
With the newfound talent, Adriano starts his journey again; this time he wants to win it all!
Will be slightly AU
Follow the journey of Adriano Riveiro , as he rises from a reject to a football legend of the century.
Not a Translation, no nationalism , just a football fanfic for all to enjoy, with a hints of romance and bit of fun. System won’t play much of a role, just some powerups and comedy.
Plz don’t drop its a very good story
Alright, it's been a long time since I wrote a review, but I decided to write one after reading your last chp. I have read a lot of football fics both good and bad and I'm an avid football fan myself, heck I'm even working on a football ff rn (though it's a translation) and based on that I can tell you you're doing a good job so far, but there are places you could improve in my opinion, romance is good and all but make sure you don't let it be the main point of your book, it should be there once in a while, also the subheadings you use at time mid chapter like; "Minute 56", "La Liga new season" could be avoided I don't know about other but personally it ruins my immersion a bit. Another main thing is it's a bit fast-paced, like I'm not saying the mc should be nerfed or anything but take the plot more slowly your matches while they're nice, they just feel like summarization at times, mind you this isn't a bad thing but this should only be used for low end fixtures or when you need to speed things up, but big matches should be fleshed out more. I don’t know how many chapters you have in mind for this book, but you certainly need to slow the plot down a bit to make the book more immersive imo. Also, even though he has Kroos and Nedved ability don’t make him win the B'dor in his first season. Trust me, it'll make the coming plots a bit redundant. There are countless other awards that can showcase his talent for the time being. I think that's all I have to say. Best of luck on your endeavour in this work because it is truly a good book. Have a nice day.
Dude, you have a lot of talent. Each character has their own characterization, not a faceless person. Best football fanfic. Finally written by someone who is really into it and lives in the culture. As far as I'm concerned, if you make an OP character, see it through to the end, don't diminish his power, just give him challenges that really matter.
Story created by a real author, I would give it 5 stars just for that, but the author destroys his story by letting himself be eaten up by criticism and negative opinions. The story is about to be abandoned and the fans of the first hour are disappointed.
Just read your rant about the reviews and whatnot and it is really eye opening for me that people would go to such lengths just because your story is not to their taste. I hope that you will keep ignoring those negative things they have to say about the story and yourself, keep doing what you are doing and thank you for sharing this wonderful story that you have worked hard on. All love from a reader.
5 stars just because you deserve it. Although the beginning is rushed and the romance was axed halfway, you have continued to improve and deliver quality content. I’m honestly feeling like telling you to quit despite wanting more, as this is not healthy to deal with toxic people with no lives. and they somehow have enough time to waste always(Dunno how they survive without working honestly )
This is my first time writing a review, but I liked this story about football. Thank you to the author for the story, and I wish you creative success. Keep up the good work.👍✊🙌
just the fact that it is not a translation with some Chinese d-riding imma rate this 5 stars
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it's great, but you are making him too op
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I’m giving it a 5 star already as my country PORTUGAL is finally mentioned. 🇵🇹❤️
Great story, keep it up! .............................................................................................................
Read till chapter 16 till now, The story is just pure gold. From what I have read, I can feel that fanfic is going to be fleshed out, as the author is very clear about the plot and the author knows how to execute his idea properly. The MC is sort of overpowered but not the Cliche op type guy, there is a realistic feel to the story. The system is just there to give MC a good headstart, and that's all. I hope the author continues to write this fic and not abandon it. Definitely one of the best football fanfic out there.
Arigato go zaimas ! Nice story development .