From Reject to Legend
A modern-day guy recieves a visit from Truck Kun, and wakes up as Adriano Riveiro, a 17-year-old football prodigy from Portugal who got released from La Masia due to a career-threatening injury, right before the end of the 2011-12 season about a year ago.
He then spent a year recovering, but he was told he could never play again. He ended his life in depression, and MC took over after that. Upon awakening, he received a system and a starter pack: the full skills and physical attributes of Tony Kroos and Pavel Nedved. With the newfound talent, Adriano starts his journey again; this time he wants to win it all! Will be slightly AU
Follow the journey of Adriano Riveiro , as he rises from a reject to a football legend of the century.
Not a Translation, no nationalism , just a football fanfic for all to enjoy, with a hints of romance and bit of fun. System won’t play much of a role, just some powerups and comedy.
There may be light bashing of chinese football fics and Mc’s
Plz don’t drop its a very good story
Alright, it's been a long time since I wrote a review, but I decided to write one after reading your last chp. I have read a lot of football fics both good and bad and I'm an avid football fan myself, heck I'm even working on a football ff rn (though it's a translation) and based on that I can tell you you're doing a good job so far, but there are places you could improve in my opinion, romance is good and all but make sure you don't let it be the main point of your book, it should be there once in a while, also the subheadings you use at time mid chapter like; "Minute 56", "La Liga new season" could be avoided I don't know about other but personally it ruins my immersion a bit. Another main thing is it's a bit fast-paced, like I'm not saying the mc should be nerfed or anything but take the plot more slowly your matches while they're nice, they just feel like summarization at times, mind you this isn't a bad thing but this should only be used for low end fixtures or when you need to speed things up, but big matches should be fleshed out more. I don’t know how many chapters you have in mind for this book, but you certainly need to slow the plot down a bit to make the book more immersive imo. Also, even though he has Kroos and Nedved ability don’t make him win the B'dor in his first season. Trust me, it'll make the coming plots a bit redundant. There are countless other awards that can showcase his talent for the time being. I think that's all I have to say. Best of luck on your endeavour in this work because it is truly a good book. Have a nice day.
Dude, you have a lot of talent. Each character has their own characterization, not a faceless person. Best football fanfic. Finally written by someone who is really into it and lives in the culture. As far as I'm concerned, if you make an OP character, see it through to the end, don't diminish his power, just give him challenges that really matter.
it's great, but you are making him too op
Read till chapter 16 till now, The story is just pure gold. From what I have read, I can feel that fanfic is going to be fleshed out, as the author is very clear about the plot and the author knows how to execute his idea properly. The MC is sort of overpowered but not the Cliche op type guy, there is a realistic feel to the story. The system is just there to give MC a good headstart, and that's all. I hope the author continues to write this fic and not abandon it. Definitely one of the best football fanfic out there.
Arigato go zaimas ! Nice story development .
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I really like this even though I agree if someone says the story development is too fast but you can make this not disgusting and weird, I hope you are consistent in uploading because I'm short of novels to read hahahahahaha, btw sorry if my language is strange, i use google translate