A Naruto fanfic where mc is not an orphan and he does not chase after every single girl in the elemental nations (#NO-HAREM CLUB) what more could you want.
~~~SYNOPSIS~~~
When a popup appeared on Jacob's screen while he was playing Minecraft to fill out the transmigration form he didn't expect it would actually happen because if he knew he would've definitely not requested any random system as his cheat.
~What to expect~
# A protagonist who is not an orphan
# NO-HAREM (No romance either at least till the point I've written)
# Even though he has a system he wouldn't become op anytime soon so there would be lots and lots of training
# Other characters won't be idiots to make the mc look smart
~What not to expect~
# HAREM
# Cold emotionless mc
# Immediate plot derailment
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I was in the moment NO-HAREM was mentioned.
Another book with heavy AI use, if you are okay with it then go ahead and read it. Personally, AI lingo gives me headaches. It’s the same formula repeated for dialogues and similarly start and end of chapters all give me strong Deja vu vertigo. ☹️
You had me at the no harem tag, I hate harem novels. That said while it is AI assisted, it still reads smoothly, it doesnt have a lot of the AI jank and bloat you see with the AI novels.
up to now it a good story , realistic progression and a fun story. No noticeable grammar error and a overall enjoyable story , recommended to give a try
a good start, he is powering up quite quickly but has a basic system. give it a try review as of ch 20
Following the shameless tradition of all webnovel authors so I don't feel particularly special giving myself 5 stars. Anyway if you like this add it to the library and if you got any questions comment here.
Everything is fine. On the plus side: there is no harem, the plot flows smoothly, the characters are alive. Of the cons: some characters are illogically brilliant compared to the main character, no one cares that the main character dispenses with seals for his ninjutsu, which is illogical, if this is common, then it's even more strange, the main character has lost his own will, moreover, it feels like the main character was not reborn into Naruto, but he just left his memory to this child, as if the child's soul had absorbed our main character, because it is strange that he is so strongly attached to his father and shows boundless love for him, zero logic, at the very beginning he even noticed that something was wrong with his emotions, but in the end he just left and I forgot, probably, the soul was absorbed gradually and there was a complete integration of personality, alas, for me this is just the biggest fear - to lose my own will and individuality. If I were in his place (theory) I would naturally not feel negative emotions towards people close to me, which is understandable for any normal person, if you are treated well and you give the same attitude in return, but I would never truly accept a stranger as my parent. Moreover, judging by the plot, his environment gradually introduces him to various ideas, the foundations of Shinobi and the meaning of existence, which is strange, because he is not really a child, but alas, this happens, which is sad.
This is definitely Great fiction. The story follows a reasonable pace of progression and the Characters are properly fleshed out. There isn't much bullshit here, if anything at all. The cheat's okay too. However, there are a few tiny little details that I'd like to address. 1. Grammar and Formatting. The Grammar in itself is alright, however, I have noticed that there are some issues with commas (,). Some sentences connect weirdly. Additionally, some of the MC's interactions are a bit too out of place with his identity (a kid). It's alright for him to be smart, but his vocabulary's a bit too complicated for a supposed child. It's quite the immersion breaker, and no World background can change that. There's also the issue that 'thought' and "speech" aren't properly distinguished. Use of AI should be avoided as well. 2. Strange lack of detail Now, the story doesn't actually lack much detail. However, I still have no Idea what the MC's Eye color is and a lot of characters don't have descriptions detailed enough to properly imagine them. This may be caused by AI interference, or a lack of oversight on the Authors part. Either way, this should be fixed one way or another. It fcks up immersion massively. P.S. The idea to put the Status panel at the End of every chapter is a good one. I'd actually prefer to see it in full detail, too. Since looking at those things is just that satisfying.
So far its been good, the progression is nicely paced, the MC is neither too Op nor weak, he has a good head on his shoulder. I'm looking forward to how the author takes this forward.
Good writing quality, the system is well implemented, secondary characters are not just useless plot devices, power scaling is well done as well.
good story please dont make it harem .
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no romance story first approach as of the latest chapter, its nothing extraordinary but still above average. Overall a likable start of the story, with nothing that stands off as bad or excellent, must wait for more chapters. 8/10