A second life, An Eternal journey to Immortality

I picked up this story on a whim and blazed through the chapters. I highly recommend giving it a shot. Loving the world building and little details that make the story feel more real. I was shocked by how connected I felt with this character. Normally, they need a lot more development to become this 3-dimensional. Characters are quite flesh out and their personality shows, they don't feel like just plot tools to advance the story and more like people living their normal lives having magic. The plot so far is not brainless and the protagonist is not a disaster star , wherever he goes, chaos bound to happen like 90% of novels out there There is not too much time wasted in the story for nothing, chapters 15 already and stuff happened, it’s not nothing for the sake of writing, there is just enough « slice of life » to balance the heavy theme of the story, Story and World building -> The backstory is fairly unique, the world building feels unique and believable so far while still being on what we would expect out of a high fantasy take on a fictional world. The system twist of this story is interesting Grammar -> Never had something that put me out of the flow of the story so far Overall, this is one of the best fictions on the site, and everyone should read it. Highly recommend!

I'm really liking this novel, short & simple chapters with good narratives & dialogues. Fellow Daoist please bless us with more chapters. Thank You!

This novel is refreshing because it focuses on the protagonist’s self-improvement rather than just romance or meaningless distractions. His journey feels realistic as he works hard to build himself into the best version possible, facing challenges and setbacks along the way. I really appreciate how the story takes its time, making every achievement feel earned rather than rushed. The slow burn aspect works well, allowing the protagonist’s growth to feel natural rather than forced. The sequence of actions is well-paced, keeping me engaged without feeling overwhelmed. The world-building is immersive, and the cultivation elements are explained in a way that makes sense without being too complex. Even with minor grammatical mistakes, the story remains compelling, and they don’t take away from the experience. The writing captures the struggles of self-discipline and improvement, making it relatable to readers who enjoy deeper character development. One of the things I like most is how the protagonist stays focused on his goals rather than being sidetracked by unnecessary drama. This makes him stand out from typical characters in the genre. I’m really looking forward to more chapters, especially to see how his training progresses and what challenges he faces next 🩵 Thank you

Such a good narrative and detailed start before his rebirth 👌 Surely deserves more attention😎

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Amazing plot and surely the details are amazing too.

"Support this Taoist priest’s fragile mental state to keep the novel going, or don’t blame him if he ruthlessly abandons the story!" " ___________________________ "

I had to open this book and I must say, it is a wonderful, read.

this is the first time i approach such a unique novel and i can tell its getting somewhere more exciting and interesting , m usually not a fan of fantasy and immortality but this novel made me very interested and opened my eyes on a new feild of excitement and joy, not only the story was good but also the sequence of actions that made it more fantastic , jiange is very interesting character that combined with intelligence and wiseness, he is very focused on upgrading himself to the next level rather than be interested in women lol , such an interesting novel i definetly recommand it to everyone 😁🤍🤍🤍🤍 please keep adding more chapters🙏