The Muse After Her Heart
Anna Maria was perfect. Gabrielle Nandia was not. Anna Maria had the sweetest of smiles, with a presence that purified upon arrival. Gabrielle did not. She was always alone and gloomy, and the only thing that followed her were bad rumors.
That day, Anna Maria was in a bad mood and wanted to eat alone. She glanced out of the window from the cafeteria. Outside, a figure sat under the tree, eating. Every bite was framed with a resplendent expression, which shone so brightly it blinded her.
There was no smile, but the expression shown was as ephemeral as ice, melting before one could fully grasp the allure of its sweetness.
Anna Maria blinked, scrubbing her eyes and readjusting her glasses to make sure of what she had seen, but the occupant had left before she could tell who it was.
She searched for a week and finally found her—Gabrielle Nandia. She grasped the palm of the startled girl with a bewitching smile.
"Gabrielle, will you please be my muse?"
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
I'm pretty shameless so~. Anyway, this is a practice short story for another larger novel I wanna write. I won't say much except that I'm quite confident I'll tickle your fancy if you love deep relationships. Not romance. Just very deep and touching. (And between girls haha). Just check it out!