Marvel: A Man with a System
David Arthur Brown was an ordinary man from another Earth, a software developer and avid fan of movies and comics until a fire claimed his life. But instead of death, he wakes up in the Marvel Cinematic Universe, inhabiting the body of a man with the same name who had fallen into a coma during the Chitauri invasion. With no way back and no idea how or why he was here, David must navigate his new reality.
Things take an even stranger turn when a glowing blue interface appears before him, an enigmatic *system* bound to his existence, offering quests, rewards, and a mysterious lottery function. But David isn’t in a rush to embrace its power. Paranoia grips him as he questions the system’s true purpose.
Will he carve his own path in this universe, or will he become just another casualty in a world shaped by legends?
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ten chapters of monumental boredom, the MC is bland, the story too, the MC's past with his mother could have been interesting if there was some progress, here it's on the edge of a friend story, with less humor and interesting characters. based on the two comments alone, I guess you delete everything below 5 stars. rather than deleting the "bad" comments, you should rework the story to make it interesting.
this is exactly like the title.. just a common guy who received a system. he has inner battles and isn't just immediately throwing himself into the fire.. a good, well compassionate guy with moral sense, but not reckless and impulsive to act on it 100% of the time. the story has a slow pace, but you can see the MC's inner thoughts changing and character evolving. yes, it might be a little boring if you are not used or simply isn't your cup of tea, but I personally appreciate the change of pace from most stories out right now. author himself is clearly evolving and gaining confidence, but I think he had a nice start.
It's a breath of fresh air. Very well written, little writing mistakes, character development is also very good. The system is not totally OP, it isn't giving him magical/super awesome powers, but it apparently grows with him, with how he does things and the situation he is in. Love that. Well, it's my first time writing a review so I don't really know what to say, I just think it's a great fanfic and a great story in general and I think that in the future it will become even better. Thanks author, you're doing a very great job. Sorry if there is any mistakes, english isn't my first language, I just know to read well and not write well... kinda weird, I know, but life is like that! :) If you read this, have a great day!
Lottery draw too easy...just happened to give him what he needs. Plot development at a snail pace, in fact the snail are in the lead. MC is so bland it's like watching British people having sex. Watching grass grow is more interesting, plot direction went all over the place... imagine Travolta pulp fiction meme. Not a bad try, just a bland MC just like British food. 🤔🤔🤔😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐
as of now (7chaps) it's a great start. - writing is good - updates are consistent - storywise i've only seen the premise so i'm waiting (for now it's great) - characters and interactions are good - world (too few chapters to see if it follows lorewise or not) keep going author you're doing great !
I'm pleasantly surprised by the writing quality. The story flows quite well and is detailed. The characters seem real enough and not just a name drop. Not many chapters at the moment but this FF shows great potential.
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Yo , Author is this going to be a harem ?
waiting for next chapter. 😎👍🏻😁. i really liked reading this work i expect more chapter really a great work to read. all the best auther.
It's a good story. Keep updating and continue the story with this pace.
The beginning is slow paced, but it's a good story. Keep it up author, I'm waiting for more chapters of this masterpiece.......................................................
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the author is doing great job so far .keep it up author. really liking the pace so dont accelerate it pls
You are making something really amazing mr author. I love how there are small snippets of him just living his life as well as him improving himself but not losing himself to it. I hope you update this story more frequently if you can. And pls don't drop this story. Thank you
Its a refreshing take on Marvel fanfic where usually you get superpower for MC but on this FF, the MC power is “traditional” more like Deathstroke which tbh I like it.