Marvel: A Man with a System

this is exactly like the title.. just a common guy who received a system. he has inner battles and isn't just immediately throwing himself into the fire.. a good, well compassionate guy with moral sense, but not reckless and impulsive to act on it 100% of the time. the story has a slow pace, but you can see the MC's inner thoughts changing and character evolving. yes, it might be a little boring if you are not used or simply isn't your cup of tea, but I personally appreciate the change of pace from most stories out right now. author himself is clearly evolving and gaining confidence, but I think he had a nice start.

It's a breath of fresh air. Very well written, little writing mistakes, character development is also very good. The system is not totally OP, it isn't giving him magical/super awesome powers, but it apparently grows with him, with how he does things and the situation he is in. Love that. Well, it's my first time writing a review so I don't really know what to say, I just think it's a great fanfic and a great story in general and I think that in the future it will become even better. Thanks author, you're doing a very great job. Sorry if there is any mistakes, english isn't my first language, I just know to read well and not write well... kinda weird, I know, but life is like that! :) If you read this, have a great day!

ten chapters of monumental boredom, the MC is bland, the story too, the MC's past with his mother could have been interesting if there was some progress, here it's on the edge of a friend story, with less humor and interesting characters. based on the two comments alone, I guess you delete everything below 5 stars. rather than deleting the "bad" comments, you should rework the story to make it interesting.

Lottery draw too easy...just happened to give him what he needs. Plot development at a snail pace, in fact the snail are in the lead. MC is so bland it's like watching British people having sex. Watching grass grow is more interesting, plot direction went all over the place... imagine Travolta pulp fiction meme. Not a bad try, just a bland MC just like British food. 🤔🤔🤔😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐

as of now (7chaps) it's a great start. - writing is good - updates are consistent - storywise i've only seen the premise so i'm waiting (for now it's great) - characters and interactions are good - world (too few chapters to see if it follows lorewise or not) keep going author you're doing great !

I'm pleasantly surprised by the writing quality. The story flows quite well and is detailed. The characters seem real enough and not just a name drop. Not many chapters at the moment but this FF shows great potential.

There is different between slow and boring. This story is either written using AI or writer decided to make a lot of useless text to an already slow story for no reason. Writing is not about typing.

The thoughts of this story is good but the story itself is too slow in development and it fills like the author don't know much about DC. or MARBLE power levels but it's a good story and if you are interested in slow development story's then this is one of the good pick story's

This story has a lot of potential, but its pacing is VERY slow. The grammar is fine, and the character interaction is impeccable, but in my opinion, there are several things that are stupid. First, the way the author nerfs his protagonist. Honestly, it's stupid. He has so much at his fingertips. He even takes on very capable characters, but he still barely handles some of the bullies and still gets hurt. 2 The author constantly focuses on useless things that don't advance the plot in the slightest. There were almost 3 chapters of a shield chase, a waste of time that could have been solved in just 1 chapter but no, the author nerfed his protagonist again leading to him barely escaping from shield agents who are frankly weak, with his current abilities he should have been able to slip away easily but the author wanted to make his protagonist look cool and took three chapters just to pose in a cool way and give a cryptic name when asked who he was "Bond, James Bond", three chapters just for that, frankly stupid. 3 and I think this is the biggest mistake so far, something that is basic, even the stupidest reincarnator would know it and something that is basically a textbook mistake, you should never and quickly NEVER fall in love with an ordinary woman in a universe like Marvel, it is frankly the biggest stupidity one can commit, perhaps just another attempt by the author to give MC more weaknesses and nerf him. He only associates with women who will be a burden when his true identity is revealed, I can already see other villains taking the poor useless woman hostage and using her to extort and control MC. This is becoming a disappointment. So much potential among all the garbage on WebNovel and yet you still screw up, just pure disappointment.

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Yo , Author is this going to be a harem ?

I have to assume this isn't this person story and that they are just posting it here. Reading through it there are comments after comments informing the "author" of mistakes, errors, and plot holes. The "author" likes the comments and doesn't fix anything.

A very intresting story. The mc is methodical and rational with a sharp mind mostly from the assimilations. though i wonder will he be getting superppowers anytime soon or is this like a peak human story?

waiting for next chapter. 😎👍🏻😁. i really liked reading this work i expect more chapter really a great work to read. all the best auther.