Ashes of the Elite

Ashes of the Elite

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Author: Vixirys
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In the nation of Avrael, power is both a blessing and a curse. Sixteen-year-old Ayato Daath, a poor orphan, had always hoped to live unnoticed in the shadows of the city. But when he is forced to undergo The Rite of Manifestation, the ritual that determines one’s magical potential, his worst fear comes true—he is an Elite.



Now torn from the only life he’s ever known, Ayato is thrust into a brutal world of magic, bloodshed, and treacherous politics. In a society where the strong prey on the weak, where rival factions scheme in the dark, and where a single misstep could mean death, Ayato must quickly learn one thing—adapt, or perish. And one thing Ayato already knows is that in Avrael, only the ruthless survive.

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Vixirys
Vixirys

Shameless author here. I know some are going to look at me giving my own story a 5 star rating as biased and you would be correct. But this will be the best book I have ever written so I think a 5 star rating is fair. No need to bring up this is the only book I have written. Anyways here a few things you can expect. Interesting MC - Ayato is a young man with a bleak and sometimes cold outlook on life however he a sense of humor not to mention the will to use every dirty trick he can to not only to stay alive in this dystopian world of his but thrive. Overpowered MC - yes and no, yes in the sense Ayato will grow and become strong but I would not necessarily say he will able to just one shot all of his enemies Romance - perhaps, I do plan for there to be romantic interests but don't know how much of emphasis I will put on it just yet. Harem - Nope, I dislike this trope. Ayato will only be in one relationship at a time. Updates - I plan to update at least three times a week, maybe this will move to a daily chapter if enough people seem to like it. If you have any questions you can leave them here. Thanks for reading.

7 days ago
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Tolyo
Tolyo

Absolute cinema of a web novel. If you haven't read this but you're reading this review then wth are you doing, start reading this.

2 days ago
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PoeticSoul
PoeticSoul

I held off reviewing until now, because I wanted to wait and give my honest opinion of this novel, and now I can finally say it's peak. Why's it peak? because the author writes with passion. The story doesn't feel soulless. If you like "Red Rising" you'll mostly enjoy this. The MC is not a generic, copy and paste character. He has personality. The dynamic he has between other characters are well written. The grammar is good, though I'm sure there's room for improvement, I'm too dumb to notice. The power system is great, from what I've seen so far. It's actually quite unique, I haven't seen anything like it. The Mc's power seems like it's going to be alot of fun to see how he uses it. overall I came expecting silver and struck gold instead, I really hope the author continues this story!

3 days ago
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Notreallykarma
Notreallykarma

Really good so far, excited to see that happens. The prologue seems to be a flash forward

7 days ago
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