Power is everything, an ideal embraced by countless souls, a philosophy that pulses through the veins of this world. In a society where might reigns supreme, individuals are not measured by their intelligence, their kindness, or their charm. Instead, they are defined by their strength—the raw, unyielding force they wield. In this realm, it is power that dictates the course of life, not virtue or merit. Those who possess it can shape the world around them, seizing wealth, respect, and influence with nothing but a display of their might. Strength is the currency, and those without it are left to linger in the shadows, overlooked and forgotten.
Nice job so far! It seems pretty interesting and I'm looking forward to you continuing to flesh everything out and build a world that stands out from others.
I really like how well written the book is so far, although it's new you have a lot of potential as an author, I hope you continue to write.