Rebirth: What’s Left of Me (BL)
Jack Spencer used to be someone else. Someone older, someone hardened, someone who made the mistake of trusting the wrong people—and paid for it with his life. Now, he’s in a different body, staring at a future that doesn’t belong to him.
He should be grateful for this second chance. He should want to start over. But how do you move forward when every part of you is still trapped in the past? How do you live when you already died once?
Jack tells himself he doesn’t need friends. He doesn’t need love. He doesn’t need anything but distance. But the more he pushes people away, the more they insist on seeing the person he refuses to be.
And when the remnants of his past begin creeping into his new life, Jack has to decide: Is he doomed to repeat the same mistakes, or can he finally break free from the dead-end path that refuses to let him go?
(Trigger Warnings Included)
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
Betrayals and harsh happenings shape the person into something strong and confident, which can be found in MC of this novel. The emotions discussed here truly reflects with basically realistic human feelings. Great work 👍
Kudos writer, I liked how you Came up with this concept for novel.
I'd say the first chapter is an indication of how investing in 'good' does not necessarily mean there will always be positive results. The idea of earning good karma introduced a few chapters later also reinforces this idea. I assume this is one of the themes. Anyway, the story is really good as far as I have read. The writing style has a nice flow, and the more you read, the more you understand Jack, the MC better. I especially like that after rebirth, he is determined to take control of his life and accepts the paths that's the system puts in front of him without hesitation. Bro really clears the missions the system gives him in the same chapter, which is also an indication of the story's rapid pace. I like it. I like the dialogue as well. It feels real and not robotic and familiar (to an annoying degree) as you'd find in other stories about regression or rebirth. The characters feel distinct. I like the story's direction so far. Keep it up, author!!
I don't usually read books, but this one grabbed my attention with its mystery. I loved it.
A captivating beginning! The first-person perspective draws you in, making the character's emotions feel almost tangible. I’m curious to see just how chaotic things will become in the next chapters
Amazing and interesting to read trust me you would love it
I am not really a fan of bl but this is so amazing and cool I must say. Thus the story flow is so cute HAHAHAH. makes you wanna read for more. This will be in my library forever. a Must Keep!!!!!
I really love the concept of this novel because I really relate to this character I also feel I don't need love and friends 😊so it's quite entertaining.
The story seems to be mysteriously interesting with sudden unfolding of happenings and unpredictable things taking place which keep the readers firmly bound to it! Great work 👍
really enjoyed this! It’s fun to read, The story has great potential and will likely attract more readers soon. With consistent updates, it’s bound to do really well! and I’m eagerly waiting for more chapters. Keep it up, Author! 😊👍