Ganesha77

This book is my first creation so I am hoping for some honest reviews of good readers. I wish to improve my writing and would appreciate some guidance 

this book is about a guy who gets reincarnated as a bird and fake god

Reincarnated As A Fake God

Startled by the sudden voice, he hurriedly looked around to find the source of the voice. But no matter where he looked, there was nothing capable of talking.

Just as he was about to brush it off thinking he was just hearing things the voice came again.

[Don't tell me you didn't recognize a great being like me, you worthless bug]

The voice seemed to speak directly to his mind. It was full of arrogant pride, as if it didn't find him worth talking to.

One thing was certain: whoever or whatever was the owner of the voice was full of itself and looked down on everything else.

His mind raced, trying to figure out who was talking to him.

"It seemed certain I would recognize it, and I am hearing him directly in my mind. So.... don't tell me! ... You're the voice of the System!?"

The possibility of having a system as rude as this made him shudder. He desperately wanted to deny that possiblity but fate had different plans for him.

[Don't call me 'system,' you trash! What am I, your friend? Show some respect] system roared as he continued cursing Ren.

[How dare a pathetic bug like you call me by my name? If you desire my help, address me with respect.]

Ren's mouth hung open in shock and disbelief. He couldn't believe his ears. He thought his mind was playing tricks on him.

"Ha! Unbelievable! ... I remember in the novels I used to read, the system was friendly, kind, and supportive. What is this? Did I just get the worst system"

Thinking of the benefits he could get by having a cheat like system, he threw away all his pride as well as anger. He made himself look as friendly as he could and said in a very very very polite tone.

"Oh supreme one, forgive me for not recognizing you sooner. Please accept my gratitude from the bottom of my soul for blessing me with your presence"

[Good, good. That's more like it. I like people like you who know how to show respect.]

"I-I thank you for praising a fool like me"

[You have great potential kid, don't waste it. As I am very pleased with you I will give you some help you need adapt to this world]

Feeling his flattering paying off he smiled in satisfaction. The thought of receiving help from the system made him drool a little.

After praising and thanking the system for a while he asked what he truly wanted to ask.

" Supreme one, how do I check my status window? I tried a few things earlier but nothing worked."

"Oh! So, you were trying to check your status earlier. I was wondering why you were shouting weird things in the middle of the day at the middle of the forest. I thought you had gone crazy from shock]

"〒〒... Not at all, supreme one" Ren replied, not letting system's insults affect him.

[Hmmm. Good, good. You sure do know how to show respect, don't you??

If you want to find out your skill and abilities just visualize a transparent blue screen appearing in front of your eyes]

It would be a lie to say he wasn't excited to find out what kind of cheat skills he was given upon reincarnating so he did as he was told while listening to the system's explanations.

[Every person in this world has at least 3 skills so as a reincarnater you should have at least twice as that]

Hearing the system's explanation he got more excited as he visualized a screen appearing in front of him.

My system is the worst