[Chapter 350: Issues with Accommodation]
[T/N: This part is about Link giving feedback to Feihong Yu on her graduation movie.
He suggested that had she structured her directorial script beforehand, with clear planning for each scene and necessary design elements, it would have mitigated many challenges during filming.
The second issue was that the opening felt dull. Frequently, new directors struggle with gripping the audience's attention before the plot officially kicks off, leading to a collection of meaningless shots that made the film difficult to watch.
The third point was that the storyline felt lengthy, with a slow pace. Certain areas needed to be expedited to connect the narrative, while others required a more delicate touch to allow the audience time to reflect; this was another aspect that she hadn't quite mastered.
Later, Link asks her to join the set in Tunisia in October, as an assistant on the crew.
He asks her to be his girlfriend, for which she accepted.
She says she does not have a place to stay in LA, so he decided to have her stay at a villa owned by Joan Chen, which was also under his name. ]
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