Extra’s Rise: I Stole All The Women In The Hero’s Party
“Look, I don’t need to be the strongest — I just need to be slightly stronger than the guy trying to kill me.”
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Zayn Eldrake was nothing more than a nameless extra in the grand tale of summoned heroes — a disposable swordsman in the legendary Hero of Light’s party, fated to die in an early battle against the monsters of the Apocalypse.
But when he awakens in this doomed body with memories of his past life, he refuses to meet the same pathetic end.
He knows the story. He knows the heroes. He knows their strengths, their weaknesses… and most importantly, their women.
With the power of [Devourer’s Pact], Zayn can consume the abilities of those he defeats, transforming himself into something far greater than a mere extra.
Strength, magic, divine blessings — everything in this world is his for the taking. And if fate itself stands in his way? He’ll devour that too.
The novel had a good premise but was terribly executed. pros 1) decent writing quality without much grammatical errors 2) good premise and background cons 1) MC - He is one of those guys who thinks they are clever but appears to the stupidest out of all of them. He has read the novel before . But acts nothing like that. He gasps , exhales and smirks at each and every thing. According to him , being with a NERD is somehow worse than being with a hero who has previously killed him before due to his inadequacy . He is much too talkative for a guy who has just been transmigrated and he wishes to jump into the fight immediately????. To add insult to the injury, he thinks with his lower half and has a savior complex. I was rooting for the villains and other heroes most of the time rather than the MC. He is one of the most terribly written characters in the entire novel. Dumb and arrogant is a terrible combination. Kinda sad .
Great novel, with humour. Definitely a good read and I highly recommend as a fellow author.
Phew time for an Author review and I want to ask, Why the hell are you waiting to review? It’s peak, there are curvy women with big bundas 👀and we have a sturdy plot, come drop 5 star reviews bruh
Honestly the image portrays this story to be just nsfw but so far it has been the exact opposite and very enjoyable and not just a sex fest the humor in it is nice and just like it a lot and would recommend for you to read it as well!
I like it. I feel like it's worth spending money on In my opinion. However, you do you. And i'm going to wait until the review is out Before I actually spend money
My analysis from reading the free chapters (29) is that the story's proposal is good, after all it's quite fun to read about an underdog doing well against "heroes" or "chosen by destiny" doing badly since they are usually described as arrogant... but here it's the opposite, the only hero presented so far in terms of skill is the one with "knowledge" and he is extremely competent, efficient and skillful, on the other hand, the protagonist is stupid and arrogant, as for the reasons for him being like this: 1- He is also a reincarnated from earth (just like the heroes) and he even read the novel of this world so theoretically he would know about the future right? but no, he doesn't know that he needs to get the monsters' core, he doesn't know how the adventurers' guild works, the only thing he knows is how the red district works and about the members of the future harem of the hero of light. 2- He makes a stupid comment in everything, is he going to fight? He complains, are you going to help an alchemist clean the store? He questions if he should be doing this, you're going to enter through a dungeon door and the hero of "KNOWLEDGE" is giving you instructions? He makes a sarcastic comment. 3- He has a devouring system, the name makes its function obvious, but he didn't bother to try to understand it to become stronger even when he had time, as if he knew he was cannon fodder, but he acts like he's the king of this world. Overall, I agree with the negative reviews about the protagonist, he managed to ruin this work all by himself and honestly, whether he does well or steals the harem being so incompetent, arrogant, stupid and sarcastic, it's not something pleasant to read in my opinion... mainly because the proposal of the story is not something new, no, in fact it's quite cliché, but it's a fun cliché to read when it's well done, but when it's poorly written, this is the result.