Denis Walters's death shatters the gilded facade of his wealthy family, revealing a web of secrets and betrayal. Samson Walters vows to uncover the truth behind his uncle's demise, while Deacon, disgusted by the family's greed, abandons their opulent estate. Within its walls, hidden agendas simmer, and long-buried secrets threaten to surface. As Samson delves deeper into the mystery, and Deacon seeks to expose their treachery, the family's carefully crafted world of wealth and privilege begins to crumble, exposing the dark price of their fortune.
Add more soup to the story. The starting is well built but I want to know more about that Samson, and what he plans to do to those people in the estate. Overall, it's a good story for me.
Good day my friend. It's really an intriguing storytelling. But you are delaying Samsons arrival, I want to see how he deals with those people.
Nice story so far dear. Continue with it. But I would like it if you improve on the world building. It pales in that area. But so far it's a good story. Continue.