Wudang's Lost Sword Returns
(Story was dropped, but another will be written 'A Villain's Guide To Saving The World')
After Wudang’s crushing defeat in the war against Cheonma, the once-revered sect teeters on the edge of ruin. Among its dwindling disciples is Jiang Chen, a so-called third-rate martial artist—abandoned by his master, ridiculed by his peers, and resigned to mediocrity. But when a fateful duel leaves him broken in both body and spirit, his path takes an unexpected turn.
Seeking solace beneath an ancient ginkgo tree, Jiang Chen discovers a letter bearing the handwriting of his vanished master. The message is clear: prove himself worthy, or walk away forever. In his grasp lies the remnants of a forgotten blade, and as he draws it, an ancient voice rumbles through the heavens—"So the time has finally come."
Bound to a master long lost and a sect on the brink of collapse, Jiang Chen must rise beyond his limits, uncover the truth behind his master’s disappearance, and wield a shattered sword to carve his own destiny. But in a world where strength dictates all, can an abandoned disciple defy fate itself?
A tale of martial arts, redemption, and the unyielding flow of destiny—now entwined with a game-like system that holds secrets even the heavens cannot grasp.
Shameless author here, reviewing my own work! Just a quick rundown of what to expect from Wudang’s Lost Sword Returns. I'm a new author, so your comments and reviews will help shape the story and improve my writing! This is a classic Murim story with a slight twist—if you're looking for an MC who abuses the system, this might not be for you. This tale is all about natural growth, deep connections with the world and its characters, and a hint of the game system genre for those who love it. But don’t worry, power fantasy and overpowered moments are still here, and yes, romance fans—I’ve got something for you too. Hope you enjoy the journey! Looking forward to your thoughts!
Great start to this novel! Immediately got hooked from the first 4 chapters of the story! Writing quality is amazing as hell, BUT you could still improve by making use of more conciseness and sharper prose. Dialogue as natural, as it should be, and I really like how distinct your characters' voices are. Now, it may need some work on characters' appearances and the world-building, BUT you could always do that in the later chapters. Aside from that, keep it up man! I can see great potential in your book!
It was good, like good I've seen some that are like this but I think that this is actually a good one, I appreciate the writer of this novel a lot
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