I’m sorry the first chapter was good the you put the same thing on the next chapter but just worded differently and with a different way to the same outcome then the next two chapters are good but the chapter after that is just a repeat again it’s so confusing I think you should redo this whole thing before you add anymore chapters and take your time on them if you want to do them in you can do them in bulk and then send them to your friends or whatever have them look over it if they find something wrong with it, they can point out whatever it is and fix it. You edit it and then you can post it.
I’m sorry the first chapter was good the you put the same thing on the next chapter but just worded differently and with a different way to the same outcome then the next two chapters are good but the chapter after that is just a repeat again it’s so confusing I think you should redo this whole thing before you add anymore chapters and take your time on them if you want to do them in you can do them in bulk and then send them to your friends or whatever have them look over it if they find something wrong with it, they can point out whatever it is and fix it. You edit it and then you can post it.