All-In: A Bet Against the End!

All-In: A Bet Against the End!

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Author: LuciferatW0rk
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The world is ending.



Adam, a man in his 20s and a gambling addict, never expected his biggest bet would be on survival itself. As Earth crumbles under the weight of an apocalyptic event, an unknown System forces the remaining survivors into a deadly tutorial. With no choice but to play along, Adam must rely on his wits, instincts, and the one thing he's always trusted - his ability to take risks.

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I liked the grounded approach to Adam Sciver’s character. His struggles with money and gambling make him feel real, and the slow buildup to the outbreak was well done. The sense of unease grows naturally, with small hints that something is off before things take a turn for the worse. The ending, with the sirens blaring, was a strong hook. That said, some parts felt a bit rushed. Adam’s job situation and his desperation for money are introduced quickly, but I wish there was more time to really feel his struggles before the outbreak took center stage. Also, while the writing is effective, there were moments where it could’ve used more description—especially in the city scenes. The eerie atmosphere was there, but a little more detail could’ve made it even stronger. Overall, it’s a solid start. The story does a good job balancing personal struggles with the larger crisis, and I’m curious to see where it goes. With a bit more depth in some areas, it could be even better.

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