As a fellow lover/writer of system novels, when this appeared on featured, I thought I'd check it out. Glad I did. It's obvious from the pacing of the first chapter that this is a writer who knows how to show, rather than tell, teasing out the expectation, then chilling atmosphere, then a shift to humour and ridicule. Would definitely recommend. Especially if you're a fan of build your army / Solo Leveling kinda power systems 👍
2 months ago
3
ShadowLord123
For now. this is a good novel. Just that there to much self praise or what can I call it. "I did it", "I overcame it", "I didn't die", "I lived".......and the likes. it's too much
3 months ago
2
LakenyXY
I'm really starting to enjoy it! It does have some familiar elements from other web novel systems, but overall, I'm liking it.
3 months ago
1
nameyelus
enjoying reading will continue to follow
3 months ago
1
light_the_fox
the story feels like someone went through a bad AI story generator many words are repeated but in a different way and their is a title for pretty much every paragraph, the premise of the story is great but the writing is terrible
2 months ago
0
Nelsen2468
If this is really going to be remade please slow the story down and provide a little explanation for how our MC knows advanced military formations and such. Also stop giving titles or whatever you want to call them to every new situation the MC encounters. There is no reason for you to write out in bold magic gun then proceed to explain how he bought a magic gun it does nothing but ruin the flow of the story.
As a fellow lover/writer of system novels, when this appeared on featured, I thought I'd check it out. Glad I did. It's obvious from the pacing of the first chapter that this is a writer who knows how to show, rather than tell, teasing out the expectation, then chilling atmosphere, then a shift to humour and ridicule. Would definitely recommend. Especially if you're a fan of build your army / Solo Leveling kinda power systems 👍
For now. this is a good novel. Just that there to much self praise or what can I call it. "I did it", "I overcame it", "I didn't die", "I lived".......and the likes. it's too much
I'm really starting to enjoy it! It does have some familiar elements from other web novel systems, but overall, I'm liking it.
enjoying reading will continue to follow
the story feels like someone went through a bad AI story generator many words are repeated but in a different way and their is a title for pretty much every paragraph, the premise of the story is great but the writing is terrible
If this is really going to be remade please slow the story down and provide a little explanation for how our MC knows advanced military formations and such. Also stop giving titles or whatever you want to call them to every new situation the MC encounters. There is no reason for you to write out in bold magic gun then proceed to explain how he bought a magic gun it does nothing but ruin the flow of the story.