There are stories that are only told in whispers. There are tales that should have remained buried in darkness. With every page you turn, with every word you read, you draw closer to something you were never meant to know.
If you ever feel like someone is watching you while reading this... perhaps you are not alone.
Okay, to the point, first, your writing still needs improvement, many are too short, and moreover, emotional blur, but I noticed an interesting flow, just don't get good execution, for the next you can learn how to write better, such as making the narrative feel alive, etc.