Got trapped in the body of a villain aspirant.
System Alert: Welcome to the Aethonian Realm!
- Level: 1
- Class: Failed Experiment
- Title: Blood Seeker
- Experience Points: 0/100
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He swiped his hand through it, but the notification stayed put, tracking his movements. So, not a hallucination after all. Great.
"A game," he whispered. "I'm stuck in some kind of... living game."
A good premise, but the world building is very weak. Characters have no depth and the opening scenes are inconsequential. It's just hasty, with no real stakes involved and feels like it's written by an AI. Certainly a good idea, but lacks emotions and driving goals/objectives that can move the plot forward by building a good narrative.
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