The Black Masked One awakened in an unfamiliar world nameless, memoryless just a consciousness drifting in an endless cosmic void. The only things he possessed were a mysterious black mask and an intricate system interface before him, displaying a new reality:
[Planetary Management System Activated…]
[You have been granted control over an abandoned planet…]
[Initializing preliminary tests…]
With no understanding of his past or purpose, the Black-Masked One began exploring the system. He soon discovered that he could allocate Cosmic Points, develop his planet, and nurture its inhabitants to grow stronger. He started with nothing a barren world, frail creatures, a civilization yet to be born. But he was no ordinary being.
With each decision, each modification, and every point he invested, the planet began to transform. The land flourished, resources replenished, and the inhabitants evolved into formidable warriors. Step by step, he tested the limits of his power, forged a new civilization, and raced against time to make his planet the greatest, the most advanced, and the strongest in existence.
But the system was no mere game there were consequences.
[Warning: Other planets are evolving… The competition has begun…]
Done reading! I'm speechless. It's my first time reading a novel with a world building concept. It has a very good start. The descriptions and the story writing are not abrupt, the pacing is enough, not too slow, not too fast. Keep up the good work author! Explore your characters, give them their respective designs. Goodluck!
One of the best first chapters I've read. A very unique idea. I hope you complete this novel. It has a great future.
I loved it, new idea, beautiful system method
man this is incredible keep going the best