THE HOUR OF RECKONING:is it late?
After her father was brutally murdered,Kaira Zenya became consumed by a burning desire for revenge.
She was convinced that the youngest king of Yusari Kingdom,king Letuka was responsible for her father’s demise.
Kaira planned to destroy the king’s life by feeding him a slow poison that will take his life after consuming in ten times,The king just have to consume the poison for that calculated period of time.
But when unexpected secrets and lies began to surface,Kaira began to question the innocence of the King.
And as the truth slowly uncovered,Kaira realized that she was targeting the wrong person for her revenge, by putting the king’s life at risk.
would the king ever find out about Kaira’s plot?
would the King take the complete dosage of the poison before the truth unveiled?.
I think the concept itself isn't noteworthy, but the execution is pretty decent so far and the writing is also solid enough. the problem i have with this novel is that the dialogue is kinda..flat. it lacks the punch, because athe uthor doesn't add subtext or description on how they feeling which will benefits it by adding more emotions. overall decent start
i like it it reminds me of Bridgeton series 🤣🤣
Wow, I love your story idea, can you continue please. Your plot is very amazing, and you did well in the characters description. I can't wait to read more about it. I love everybit of it.
I'm absolutely loving your story so far🙂I've read a few chapters and I must say, the writer has done an amazing job. The plot is engaging and the characters are well developed. While there's always room for improvement, I think you've made a fantastic start. Keep up the great work😁
loving it from start I strongly recommend
please continue this story is really great please continue
absolutely mind-blowing and captivating novel, Author🔥