GOT Thor Travelling

Thor mc? I'm in ........................

Just because ff's of Thor is rare as is. And I can see why..........

the idea is great but the execution is shit, remove the system influence except the stauts, dont make him lick everyone's ass by saying my lord, dont make it harem or sex, i really hope you do something that makes me change mt review

its bad from the start, decent if you ignore that mc isnt thor and cant do anything on its own without system quests.

I have always seen Thor as a perfect fit for the world of Game of Thrones, and I wished someone would write about it. I was pleasantly surprised when I found this story. So far, this story is amazing. There aren’t many chapters or events yet, but up to this moment, it’s been great.

freaking amazing story that I will definitely recommend I just hope the author doesn't ruin it . please write more it freaking amazing

This is pretty good. The writing quality is average (by Webnovel standards), the update frequency is good, and the plot is somewhat original in that it actually diverges from canon in a logical manner due to butterfly effects of the MC's actions. The author has floated the idea for a world-hopping aspect that I'm not enthusiastic about, but it hasn't happened yet so I'll hold out hope that author changes his mind in the future

Let me go over this one by one. *cracks knuckles* Writing Quality- 4/5; There's practically zero grammatical errors and it's very easy to follow and read. The short chapter length later down the line leaves much to be desired though. At one point, a chapter came out and ended without anything happening. It's a very easy fix though, so not anything to whine about. Author, if you want to follow other povs, I think it's better to dedicate an entire chapter to them, after a good chunk of the mc's chapters. If you leave a chapter on a cliffhanger and then come back to have half the chapter about bran simply walking and talking and then the other half only Thor looking around, it's not a very good look. You can either space out the differences, or simply make the chapters bigger. That ought to fix the dissatisfaction among readers. It's not that they hate following other characters, but they hate it when the Mc himself gains no further development especially when every other chapter is about bran. Space them out. Other than that, I have no nitpicks. Story Development- 4/5; It's the first story I found that starts the Mc beyond the wall. I might even use that when I make my own fantic. The start was great and everything seems logical. Well, far more logical than something you would find on webnovel at the very least. The decisions taken by the characters do seem logical, but in hindsight, sometimes, they lose the appeal. But I get how that can be used to make hype moments so I digress. A recurring theme, I noticed that the author was trying to go with was that the Mc is in the body of the rightful heir of Robert? It hasn't been explicitly stated but it's pretty obvious that's the way the author is taking it. I wasn't with the idea at first, and still not sure if I am, but to each his own. Character Design- 3/5; I'm going to be honest, I've never watched the series. Read the books long time ago and don't remember most of the characters so I'm basing this off solely on the MC. He's a weird case. His personality is merged with Thor and of course, that's a lot of memories so if anything, I'd be somewhat like Thor with the memories of a mortal. It makes him more reserved and mindful, but it may also lead to decisions that seem... questionable. His motivations are simple, get out of GOT and preferably, get some hygienic toiletries. Other than that, not much to say about him. He did not strike me as a memorable protag. He IS very entertaining don't get me wrong, but he doesn't have a... I don't know how to explain it. Update Stability- 5/5; Updates regularly, so very good. World Background- 5/5; a bit peeved you went with the series, but I can't expect you to go with the books. It's your story at the end of the day and I respect that, so full score. Overall Scrore- 4.2/5 TL,DR; A good fic to spend time with. Will keep you engaged for a good chunk if you're binge reading and there's really no cons to reading it. The people that complain about him not having all of Thor's powers don't understand the character goals and interactions. This isn't a song of grace and fury, and the Mc doesn't need to tackle an existential crisis, he is gathering power to stay happily, so keep that in mind when you read it.

The story is promising, although i think you should limit the system's interference with Thor seeing it's a template system and not your typical RPG system.

Just pure fuqing gold bro. Got no other thing and words to express its quality and the story, the characters engagement and all those things are pure legit gold. Yes a little proof read whould have helped in finding very little tiny grammer mistakes in chapter but overall its 24 caret and I'm sure most of you guys won't even notice mistakes and be like he was just trash talking but thats the special thing about this book its just so immersing that you dont care about anything other than it.

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good stuff can't wait for more..................................................................................................................................