The Sovereign's Path: A Shadow Slave Fanfiction

This is a really great Story. The grammar and the choice of words are really good. Till now the Story develops pretty good. I don't know how it will develop or what the plan is for the main cast but there are hints that he wants to guide them when they are still weak and be there for them. Other than that I really like the character design. It feels like the MC is a real person and not just one of those who have no personality. And lastly the Update stability. tbh can't say anything about it yet. I don't know if the author has like times when he uploads or if it's just whenever. (Could you please tell me if you read this) all in all really great and I hope for and expect more chapters. Of course in exchanged for more powerstones

It’s super fast paced leaving almost no room for character interaction and design (personality wise) I know this is a fanfic so you already know the personalities of the og characters but you have to show them in the story, but my main gripe is the fast pace, plus I’m pretty sure the author is using ai in some paragraphs maybe not the entire chapter, but it just feels like it. So here are the stars: Writing Quality: 4 stars (because some of it is weird) Update stability: 5 stars he hasn’t missed a day Story Development: 4 stars, it’s good but again super rushed and hard to follow at times, in fact it feels like he jumps from place to place Character Design: 2 stars because we don’t get anything World Background: 3 stars, even though nothing is explained and it is rushed, this is still shadow slave and as such the world is amazing

making things easier for him to accomplish ruins how dire Shadow Slave is and him just knowing whats gonna happen leads me to question if he'll ever accomplish anything meaningful? honestly, I appreciate you for taking your time to write about Shadow Slave but like other similiar fanfics of SS, an MC who knows what'll happen if he doesn't intervene with certainity, an aspect with zero naunces or overpowered with no build up and just generally feels like things are gonna go his way is why I dont think anyone who likes SS will stick around for such stories. Summary? give the main character a hard time.

It has potential, but after the first few, the chapters are pretty short, and a little too fast paced for my liking. It feels more like a summary than a story. The dialogue is also pretty subpar. However, everything else is pretty good, so I'll let bro cook

Very nice. Nice updating schedule. Chapters could be longer however.

Peak fanfic, this one deserves a 5⭐ ... ...

Good so far and has one of favorite character

Rlly enjoying this so far! Like the choice of mentor. Hvnt read a fic that had the mc learn from him ever so that’s nice. Love the fact he’s not constantly worrying about the future in stuff like a lot of authors make their mc for some reason. Hope you keep up the good work and plz don’t stop this! Only other good shadow slave fic I’ve read was dropped

Imma let it, cook for a while, but even so I can already tell it's going to be peak...keep it up my goodman

Eu gostei, bem sólida e está se desenvolvendo rápido, mas talvez um pouco rápido de mais Espero que diminua um pouco o ritmo ao chegar em arcos mais elaborados como a antártica Cap 23/23

this ff deserve my 5star its so peak _-----