GOD OF WAR: In God of War with Hercules Template

It has potential but has issues that bring it down. #1 power scaling. The MC hasn't even left home yet and his age is in the single digits yet he's killing ogres and trolls solo. By the time the journey begins everything will be a cakewalk with both Kratos and the MC supporting each other. #2 Character interactions. Most of the story just consists of the MC aimlessly wandering the woods for powerful foes, but Atreus falls by the wayside and it begins to feel like he doesn't even exist anymore after the latest chapters 15-21ish. Furthermore is interactions with his mother and father feel repetitive. 'control the rage' 'True power comes from discipline' X3, X4 times etc. #3 In-universe lore. Faye is described as having silver hair despite having orange hair, the author treats the Leviathan axe as belonging to Kratos despite it being forged for Faye and she's still alive. The MC being named Athenor and Atreus is still Atreus. Faye wanted to name Atreus Loki originally. Now that theres twins I feel like the MC would end up being named Atreus and the OG Atreus would end up being Loki as a compromise.

The whole book reads like it was created from a prompt to chatgpt. You can easily notice that thing chatgpt does where it says stuff like "You are strong but you must also be disciplined" or some other thing around the same vein again and again.

sorry it's AI I have tried using AI to write Fanfics to and i can tell it's very repetitive the Characters have no soul he Does not even interact with the characters and they act so one Dimensional he got to strong to quick to early and no one questions him bro even if you are just promoting why not read the story and make plot changes yourself I have tried with AI and you can do better with it then this

Great book more capters please

1 star just for that abomination of a synopsis

It’s very interesting. Give it a try, you’d like it

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Keep up the good work, it's a great story.😁 👍

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Average quality, growth and home life, everyone acts like an NPC. They use the word power too much. Kratos does not act like Kratos. There is no template system because I guess you don't know how strong FGO Hercules is. FGO Hercules is a maniac so strong that if he had a biofield that would surround the planet, he could throw a planet at you. At the age of 4, he could kill monsters that killed trained demigods. When he was a baby, he would accidentally squeeze magical boa constrictors to death thinking they were toys. FGO Hercules is literally planet level. (I'm not talking about the heroic spirit, I'm talking about when he was alive) But you say that with 3% of his strength, he couldn't lift an ordinary axe weighing at most 5 kg. Dude, at 3% of his strength, Hercules would knock Kratos down like the Hulk.

honestly wast expecting much but I'm glad I was proven wrong this novel is wonderful and it's on of the few G.O.W novels that's actually good of course there aren't many in the first place but this is really good the only thing I'm worried about is it getting dropped but that's just because most novels I read slow down or just stop getting updates after a while hope the author doesn't drop this.

Great book keep it up………………………….. . ….

Я не читал, но скажу так, идея фанфика не очень. Хотя бы тем, что Кратос в третьем боге войны, там греческая резня, Геркулес (Он же Геракл), сдох от игрока (то есть от Кратоса), после него нам дают кастеты с немейскими львами.