A New Life in Modern Family

the story is great but if you have a bunch of chapter you didnt release yet you should release them puting 15 to 20 chapter early can get you much more trafic , after that you can stockpile again and release a chapter every 2 to 3 day it helps for patreon too just a little advice dont mind me :p

The Main character seems so dry and boring. He is too perfect. No one can be too perfect especially when it comes to a slice of life story. The mc needs to have some flaws to make him more interesting. I mean he is not even funny. If he’s good at everything then nothing is special about him. That’s why modern family is such a good show because each character has their own little flaws which makes them human, it makes them feel alive. Your character might aswell be dead inside since he knows what to say all the time. The story itself is just so bland.

A fanfic of Modern Family always get a 5 star The writing quality its good so not things like traductions here. Still cant have a proper story development bcs its raw new but the first chapter is a good start that cements good stuff for the future Keep the good work.

Perfection itself can sometimes be a problem, and that's the case here. If a Mc is too perfect , he feels like a robot following a program. That basically takes away the development process. 3.5 starrs is fair enough.

Not good!! Protagonist just have everything and is boring [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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