A New Life in Modern Family

the story is great but if you have a bunch of chapter you didnt release yet you should release them puting 15 to 20 chapter early can get you much more trafic , after that you can stockpile again and release a chapter every 2 to 3 day it helps for patreon too just a little advice dont mind me :p

The Main character seems so dry and boring. He is too perfect. No one can be too perfect especially when it comes to a slice of life story. The mc needs to have some flaws to make him more interesting. I mean he is not even funny. If he’s good at everything then nothing is special about him. That’s why modern family is such a good show because each character has their own little flaws which makes them human, it makes them feel alive. Your character might aswell be dead inside since he knows what to say all the time. The story itself is just so bland.

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Perfection itself can sometimes be a problem, and that's the case here. If a Mc is too perfect , he feels like a robot following a program. That basically takes away the development process. 3.5 starrs is fair enough.

A fanfic of Modern Family always get a 5 star The writing quality its good so not things like traductions here. Still cant have a proper story development bcs its raw new but the first chapter is a good start that cements good stuff for the future Keep the good work.

It is a good slice of life kinda fic .I don't know if I'm going to keep reading it dough . The writing is good, but I'm not much of an American football fan, and there are whole chapters that is only just that, and I basically skipped it all. And it is way too much teenage drama for my taste. So I'm gonna keep it in my library just in case someday I would want to revisit it.

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The story is clearly AI-generated, goes around in generic circles of hell, and ultimately says nothing. It's truly disappointing that the guy didn't even bother to edit the AI-generated text.

5 stars hands down. One of the best fanfics I’ve read so far

Overall a great and engaging story, I don’t really understand the hate for the character himself he’s just as mature as you’d expect for someone in his situation which leads to it seeming like he has no problems. But I digress it’s well written and changes topic often enough to be interesting, my only issue with it is the relationship aspect of it, I’m of the belief that once ‘something’ is done it’s over there’s no going back that for me personally but not a take away from how engaging the story in and of itself truly is.