some spelling is not complete try to practice some grammar and make the story long so it's look interesting I like the plot twist against to the story I like how you create it but your new you need a practice so the words in your story look smooth and interesting
some spelling is not complete try to practice some grammar and make the story long so it's look interesting I like the plot twist against to the story I like how you create it but your new you need a practice so the words in your story look smooth and interesting