Lord of the Foresaken
read the first 10 chapter, and you will like it!!!
In a world where every 18-year-old is granted a noble title and a domain, Reed was never meant to rule. Born in the slums, he survived by stealing, killing, and doing whatever it took to stay alive. The world despised him, and he despised it back.
But when the Day of Lords arrived, fate played its cruelest trick yet.
Goblin Lord.
The weakest possible domain. The most pathetic summons. A rank that was practically a death sentence.
But Reed doesn’t care. He never played by the rules before, and he won’t start now. Given absolute authority over his first Hero—a deadly and completely loyal goblin woman named Shia—he embraces his title with ruthless efficiency. There are no rules he won’t break, no enemies he won’t kill, and no limits to how far he’ll rise.
If the world thinks it can laugh at him, it’s in for a nightmare.
Because the Lord of the Forsaken doesn’t bow to fate. He breaks it.
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Pretty good book and I’m not even past the first 25 chapters but I personally like the fast paced and how it gets into everything pretty fast though I do wish there was more development to the world like even one chapter of backstory for the mc at least but everything else is pretty good. Keep up the great work author
so the story flies by super quick and no real explanation on how anything works like at all. like stats are mentioned once but they don't seem to matter.
first off, this moves quick! before you're really introduced to the characters or the world, the plot advances pretty quick without much explanation. I'd love to see this slowed down, with taking more time to get the reader invested in the MC. you don't even get an idea of what he looks like until we'll into the story. a few consistency errors Luke looking up to the goblin instead of down, but this has amazing potential! as soon as I read the hero being summoned, I was in. but it never gave me time to get invested, even in the moment. some editing and this could be an amazing read!
The author's masterful storytelling has left me breathless and yearning for more. ✍️🪄❣️🔥 please i need review on my book WHISPERING FROM THE ABYSS
Very well written, realistic in terms of gritty parts of human nature (makes you uncomfortable sometimes, as it should).
I loved this story it's really interesting