Lord of the Foresaken

Hey guys, it’s me coolos, I'm a beginner writer, I want to thank everyone who has read my story, maybe it's still not good, if you have any suggestions please let me know[img=recommend][img=recommend]

This work is really interesting,relaxed and easy to understand storyline. I really liked this book and recommend that you read it soon.

Pretty good book and I’m not even past the first 25 chapters but I personally like the fast paced and how it gets into everything pretty fast though I do wish there was more development to the world like even one chapter of backstory for the mc at least but everything else is pretty good. Keep up the great work author

Yo, amazing readers! Being a new author, I’m honestly blown away by your support. Every read, comment, and like means the world and keeps me pumped to write! 🙌 Huge thanks for diving into my story. Please stick around, and if you’ve got any tips or feedback, I’m all ears.

Pretty solid start, i like how this story is going.

Interesting, the storytelling is relaxed, easy to read, and the plot is clear. And I like the MC being a goblin.

I really like this book. I love how the main character works hard to grow stronger. I definitely recommend it to you all.

Reed such a cool character. I think he deserve more attention from readers out there. This story is fast pace, but the author can make it interesting. I'm not getting bored when reading this. You did a good job author!

it's s good story, engaging, but with some holes. We are not presented.with the world and how it functions before MC becomes a Lord, we are not presented with the Lord society, we are not given and overview of the system and what it does, we do not know what is the list of alignments and what are they for, ... if the many questions get answered and the pace slows down a little, I think this may be a really great novel

This novel presents a strong plot with deeply developed characters. The author successfully presents a realistic and touching emotional conflict, coupled with a flowing and nuanced narrative. A moving and entertaining read [img=gift]

this is good but if it could be more sadistic maybe it would be more interesting[img=strong] and I like the storyline. I highly recommend this novel to pass your time.

very interesting ! keep reading until the end.

so the story flies by super quick and no real explanation on how anything works like at all. like stats are mentioned once but they don't seem to matter.

first off, this moves quick! before you're really introduced to the characters or the world, the plot advances pretty quick without much explanation. I'd love to see this slowed down, with taking more time to get the reader invested in the MC. you don't even get an idea of what he looks like until we'll into the story. a few consistency errors Luke looking up to the goblin instead of down, but this has amazing potential! as soon as I read the hero being summoned, I was in. but it never gave me time to get invested, even in the moment. some editing and this could be an amazing read!