The idea of the story is good I think that maybe just try reading it a few times before posting cause the writing is good but its just plain and where it isn't its just a little difficult to follow around. I would have liked it if he did spend some more time in other nations before going back since the whole point was to get better at smithing and while Liyue forge was good and the Mondstadt forging was good but they were one off incidents the nations weren't explored much.
The idea of the story is good I think that maybe just try reading it a few times before posting cause the writing is good but its just plain and where it isn't its just a little difficult to follow around. I would have liked it if he did spend some more time in other nations before going back since the whole point was to get better at smithing and while Liyue forge was good and the Mondstadt forging was good but they were one off incidents the nations weren't explored much.