Although the story was going on good, but I had to leave it.
It many many flaws like character development, plot building and many more. I am just starting to write books.
Sorry, but I had to leave it as it is.
If any one want they can take this.
I will now try to write a new story, better than this one.
If you have some preference than feel free to tell me, any type you want, action, supernatural, fantasy, romance I will try to do it.
Sorry for this one.