In a world where some humans have evolved into powerful Evolvers, strength determines everything. Jin Riyozaki lives a peaceful life—until a 100-million-dollar bounty is placed on his head.
When bounty hunters break into his home, Jin is forced to fight back. But why is he being targeted?
Hello everyone! I hope you're enjoying the story so far. I know it might not be as detailed as other books, but this is my first novel, so it's not perfect when it comes to descriptions. That said, from my perspective, the story is solid. I'm not trying to sound overconfident, but since this is my first work, of course, I like it! I’m still improving my writing, and I know there’s room for growth, but I believe the core of the story is engaging. If you've read it, feel free to share your thoughts—I'd love to know what you think!
Really enjoyed it! The story was fun, the characters were likable, and it kept me hooked the whole way through. It wasn’t overly complicated, but it had enough depth to make it memorable. Would definitely recommend if you’re looking for something easy to dive into!
You should definitely continue to write. I feel like this is going in a great direction, especially as your style of writing perfectly matches the needed tone of the story.