Earth was devastated by "The Fall"—a parasitic reality called the Forgotten World began consuming our own—humanity survives in isolated settlements surrounded by corrupting darkness. The city of Valtaros stands as one of civilization's last bastions, ruled by the Church of the Maw, which venerates a mysterious entity believed to be humanity's salvation.
Elias, a ruthless survivor from Valtaros's slums, discovers strange black markings spreading across his skin—the dreaded sign that the Black Maw has chosen him. Forced to undergo its lethal trials that few survive, Elias must navigate a dual-phase ordeal that tests both his skills and his moral character. As he confronts the true nature of the Maw and its connection to humanity's past, Elias faces a fundamental choice: cling to his survival-at-all-costs mentality or embrace sacrifice to forge a new balance between realities.
Nice start. I like the MC details description writing. Its a good read. Keep writing author! Cheers and all the best! [img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]
I see no faults in the book. Hope it can continue to carry on and remain consistent. I especially hope the plot builds on
How do I even put this....? This is the kind of story that makes you feel the characters like its in First person POV. Damn, I'm constantly sitting up, worrid for Elias, and silently excited when he overcomes sth. Don't give this novel a try- Just accept it and read.
Shameless author self review. :D This is my first novel, so I hope you all enjoy yourselves and the story! Please engage in any way you'd like to, any engagement helps tremendously!