Step inside if you dare, but be warned—this is no ordinary shop. Those who enter never leave the same… if they leave at all. A sinister force lurks within, fueled by a dark past and a thirst for revenge. The price? Twelve lives for twelve sins. As officials race to put an end to the bloodshed, the shop’s deadly grip tightens, claiming innocent victims one by one. Will anyone uncover the truth before it's too late? If you crave spine-tingling horror, heart-pounding thrills, and a mystery that refuses to stay buried, this book will haunt you long after the last page.
The characters did a pretty good role in the story. The story was just kind of short for me, I really need that Chapter 2 right now because you left us hanging in a cliff D: Anyways, the story was really good and I hope people also find it good. You did a good job!
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You have impressed me again to your writing skills. The deaths are really creative! I hope that I can make a novel like this also. Nice job author!
Alright so, this is actually one of the best I've seen. As a reader who reads over 1k books this is actually pretty good. Although I wanted more character development they're very likable. keep up the work.
I'VE BEEN FINDING NOVELS LIKE THIS, IT IS SO UNDERRATED LMAOOOO THE PLOT IS SO GOOD IM IN LOVE AND READY TO DIE JUST FOR CHAPTER 2, SHEESH I CANT SLEEP BECAUSE OF THIS I LOVE IT SM!!! KEEP UP THE WORK AUTHOR!!! YOU HAVE MY INTEREST AND MY VERY EXISTENCE.
The plot was actually good and the characters were also good. I'm just concerned about the foul languages y'know? I mean it's so many lol. I wish you could make the story more cleaner. But you did really good as a starter in this app. Nice one brotha[img=exp][img=golden ticket]
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