IMI | I'm Moving In
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A sudden event shook the world—a black portal emerged. No one knew what dangers lurked beyond its dark, mysterious tunnel. Was it a gateway to disaster if left unchecked?
Eren Fritzwerld, a young man, was accidentally pulled into the portal along with Jack, becoming a victim of its unknown horrors. He had no idea what awaited him, but he had already set a task for himself—
Unravel the truth and stop these portals from appearing before they strip him of his freedom.
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Note : Italic characters indicate that the individual is talking in his mind.
Usage of bold characters highlights important things.
Not really that bad. It has some interesting parts. Maybe you should keep going with the inner thoughts much more because it seems interesting.
IMI is a good action-packed urban fantasy novel mixed with a modern world vibe. Fans of non-edgy stories might like it due to it's somewhat comedic nature.
Hello there, author here. I am writing this novel to share my viewpoint of my imagination, and I do wish that this would get successful. I am new at writing, but I'll improve later on by writing more chapters. Hope y'all like this novel.