naruto:Reborn as Iruka

I really appreciate the creativity behind blending One Piece elements into the Naruto world—it’s a unique idea that caught my interest immediately. However, I found it difficult to stay immersed because the Naruto characters often behave in ways that don’t match their original personalities, with no explanation provided. I fully understand that fanfiction allows freedom to reinterpret characters. But when characters act differently from canon, there needs to be some in-story reason—whether it’s growth, regression, or changes in background. Without that, it feels random and makes it hard to connect with them authentically. Right now, it feels like familiar names are attached to completely different personalities without any justification. Additionally, the story would benefit from stronger structure and internal consistency. Events often happen without proper buildup, and some pop culture references break the tone of the world rather than enhancing it. Overall, the creativity and passion are clear. With more focus on character consistency, narrative flow, and grounded logic, this story could really evolve into something special. I hope the author keeps refining their craft—there’s real potential here.

One of the best story's I have read on this site.

Has good potential but author needs to make some changes and edits then this would be a great ff. Now its just good. I know you are lazy and me too but come on we have to read this so edit your damn ff.

This webnovel is good, I like it, The story is interesting, and the characters are enjoyable. I'm looking forward to more updates to pass the time

Bro why did you delete the novel, it is very good 👍

I like it. It’s my favorite Naruto fanfic so far cause he reincarnated as iruka

Lno es mala pero la historia no avanza 🙃

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This looks like it got a lot of potential hopefully to keep seeing you update the story!

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Good Fanfic.................................................................................................................................

This was... poorly done. I mean, I get the point, but the personal dynamics are awful as hell. Most of what I read was accompanied by a mental "What?" with a look of genuine confusion. Not contempt or impatience, just pure confusion. It doesn't feel real at all, whether it's the dialogue that seems to be meant to evoke empathy but just feels forced, or the characters' actions that don't match their original personalities.