A sincere review
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Writing quality:
Solid, and honestly really fun to read the protagonist’s thoughts and convos with everyone else. something about it gives a funny contrast to skyrim.
[5.0]
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Stability of updates:
Right now it’s a bit unstable since there’s no set schedule — 7 chapters in 13 days. but honestly? not bad overall. there was a chapter yesterday and another today. and to be real? totally worth it. the story’s been great so far.
[5.0]
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Story development:
Starts off with the classic skyrim intro, but changes are slowly showing up and evolving. the mc clearly has some issues — not necessarily bad ones — and every other character feels more alive and real.
Only 7 chapters so far and they’ve just gotten to riverwood, so not much has happened yet. but judging by the pacing, i’ve got high hopes.
[5.0]
(Don’t leave your wives unattended while reading this one)
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Character design:
Interesting enough to feel promising. not many chapters = not a ton to comment on yet, but it’s already clear that there’s something extra going on with the protagonist. i like to think of him as an "unreliable narrator" — but i could totally be wrong.
If this story goes the way it’s hinting, i’m really looking forward to the start of the dawnguard dlc (serana my beloved). horny thoughts aside, the character interactions are solid so far — no one’s annoyingly overdone either.
Definitely a strong point so far. already better than a lot of other skyrim fics out there.
[4.5]
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World background:
Skyrim! skyrim! it’s perfect. there haven’t been any major changes so far, so it gets the same score as og skyrim: peak. some small tweaks in simple relationships, but that’s it.
We still don’t know if the world’s “pure” or if there’s some mod in play (With how things are going, i wouldn’t be surprised if something like [the buxom wenches] popped up — amazing mod if you ignore some things :p). But for now, the world feels pretty solid.
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Final score:
4.8/5.0
Not much else to say — i’ve got high expectations. they usually get crushed, but no matter what happens (within reason), i’ll stick with this story. disappointment and flaws are part of the ride and totally fine.
You should give it a shot too~!
2 months ago
11
Luan_Ramos
I'm really enjoying the story so far and it's a Skyrim story that has a harem, so that alone deserves 5 stars and there will also be travel to other worlds. Also, what do you think about making the Mc earn Skyrim mods through the system like Skyrim Skill Uncapper as well as Experience mods etc as well as several other Skyrim mods?
2 months ago
3
WTH6666
Thank you for your hard work author.I would like to know if your book has a permanent release schedule.
3 months ago
3
Otakubaku
Back at it again crispy creme with the chicken strips
2 months ago
2
Queen_Karina
It’s been a long time since I’ve found such a top tier fic like this, please please please please don’t drop author!!
23 days ago
1
Lazylemonade
I’m enjoying this so far! Its rare to find any skyrim fanfics that are gud, oh and author if u are reading this then can you make a warning note at the start of every chapter that contains netori? It’ll help me and maybe other people who aren’t in that, anyway wish you luck 🗿👍
a month ago
1
Brari
It's a good Skyrim fic, a bit slow and the updates aren't continuous, but the story is good and understandable. The world is well explained, and the MC is good.
A sincere review ===== Writing quality: Solid, and honestly really fun to read the protagonist’s thoughts and convos with everyone else. something about it gives a funny contrast to skyrim. [5.0] ===== Stability of updates: Right now it’s a bit unstable since there’s no set schedule — 7 chapters in 13 days. but honestly? not bad overall. there was a chapter yesterday and another today. and to be real? totally worth it. the story’s been great so far. [5.0] ===== Story development: Starts off with the classic skyrim intro, but changes are slowly showing up and evolving. the mc clearly has some issues — not necessarily bad ones — and every other character feels more alive and real. Only 7 chapters so far and they’ve just gotten to riverwood, so not much has happened yet. but judging by the pacing, i’ve got high hopes. [5.0] (Don’t leave your wives unattended while reading this one) ===== Character design: Interesting enough to feel promising. not many chapters = not a ton to comment on yet, but it’s already clear that there’s something extra going on with the protagonist. i like to think of him as an "unreliable narrator" — but i could totally be wrong. If this story goes the way it’s hinting, i’m really looking forward to the start of the dawnguard dlc (serana my beloved). horny thoughts aside, the character interactions are solid so far — no one’s annoyingly overdone either. Definitely a strong point so far. already better than a lot of other skyrim fics out there. [4.5] ===== World background: Skyrim! skyrim! it’s perfect. there haven’t been any major changes so far, so it gets the same score as og skyrim: peak. some small tweaks in simple relationships, but that’s it. We still don’t know if the world’s “pure” or if there’s some mod in play (With how things are going, i wouldn’t be surprised if something like [the buxom wenches] popped up — amazing mod if you ignore some things :p). But for now, the world feels pretty solid. ===== Final score: 4.8/5.0 Not much else to say — i’ve got high expectations. they usually get crushed, but no matter what happens (within reason), i’ll stick with this story. disappointment and flaws are part of the ride and totally fine. You should give it a shot too~!
I'm really enjoying the story so far and it's a Skyrim story that has a harem, so that alone deserves 5 stars and there will also be travel to other worlds. Also, what do you think about making the Mc earn Skyrim mods through the system like Skyrim Skill Uncapper as well as Experience mods etc as well as several other Skyrim mods?
Thank you for your hard work author.I would like to know if your book has a permanent release schedule.
Back at it again crispy creme with the chicken strips
It’s been a long time since I’ve found such a top tier fic like this, please please please please don’t drop author!!
I’m enjoying this so far! Its rare to find any skyrim fanfics that are gud, oh and author if u are reading this then can you make a warning note at the start of every chapter that contains netori? It’ll help me and maybe other people who aren’t in that, anyway wish you luck 🗿👍
It's a good Skyrim fic, a bit slow and the updates aren't continuous, but the story is good and understandable. The world is well explained, and the MC is good.
Pretty good skyrim fic keep up the good work