Haikyuu : To The Top
Shoyo Hinata’s volleyball journey was supposed to be over—at least, that’s what he thought after a grueling pro match that left him standing across the net from Kageyama one last time. But when he wakes up in his childhood bedroom, trapped in the body of his fifteen-year-old self, he realizes something impossible has happened.
The crushing defeat against Kitagawa Daiichi still stings, but now, Hinata carries something he never had before: the skills, instincts, and memories of a professional player. His body may be small again, but his mind holds a decade of experience. With Karasuno’s future burned into his memory, he sees a chance to change everything—to grow stronger, faster, and smarter before he even sets foot in the high school gym.
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This is my own fanfiction and it's not MTL
Let me know how can I improve
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Update Schedule : 7 Chapters / Week
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I will mostly update at the time of daily power stone reset time, but occasionally, there may be a delay of 5 to 10 minutes.
Give me your ideas where should the story should go Next like the direction of the storyline and comment if there are any mistakes or plotholes in the story
Currently on 5th Chapter and can already feel a lot of potential on this fanfic. First of all, I definitely love the idea of "time-travelling back to the past" instead of cliche transmigration or system plots that is everywhere in Webnovel. Writing Quality, quite literally an "Above Average" case, where you can feel the character's emotions, but not that great. Maybe do more dialogues to show a bit more character and personality. Can't judge the Stability of Updates yet since the story just started, but I feel very confident that author can provide everyday. Story Development the same case since the story just started off, would love if there were something unique to the story and doesn't just simply follow the main storyline or plot of Haikyuu. Maybe add some characters from other stories like Kuroko no Basuke and make them interact with out boys. Character Design is nonexistent in Fanfics, unless of course Author created his own OCs. But I doubt it'll affect the story either in a positive or negative way. And lastly, World Background. Can't really judge this since its just started off, but definitely would love if there were more events that'll happen to the story. Like maybe a self-created volleyball tournament, yadidadida and stuff like that. In conclusion, the story definitely have a lot of potential, it started off great, and hopefully do well in the near future. Good Luck to you Author, I'll definitely enjoy this story everyday.
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