Marvel: Hela, Queen Of Hel

Hello guys, Codeblack here on the phone, cooking up a new dark and funny story. The "dark" part doesn’t mean depressing stuff—just a bit of dark humor. Anyway, don’t expect things to be written like a pro; honestly, this is just my writing style. Sure, there may be many flaws, but don’t forget—I’m human and evolving with every chapter. So yeah, just read the story. You’re not here to criticize an amateur for not having the writing style of a pro. Finally, enjoy the ride.

Whenever there is Yuri I'll be there! Please don't drop.

As of chapter 6 there are 2 characters in the story, the MC and Madame Hydra but they have the exact same personality and mannerisms, they both talk and act like those annoying Tumblr 'oops I'm such a crackhead chicks'. Even if there was an excuse for a stone cold killer from the 20th century acting like this, or for her to be the same character as the MC, it still wouldn't make this worth reading considering how bloody annoying they are.

Great concept, there's very few Hela fanfictions. Honestly, my only problem is that so far literally every chapter can be summarized in just a short sentence.

if you drop this I'll drop myself off a cliff out of a broken heart <3 joking but this is a amazing start and I'm Really looking forward to where you take this. though I must ask what conversations shes having with the rocks..

First of all, it's a great concept of a lot of potential so far, so plz don't fumble.

Read to chapter 21 A great read from a new perspective Absolutely fantastic, a mc who doesn’t bunker down to train, nor is on a power trip Worth the read and brilliant! Have a great day author

So far so good. Keep it up author!

I dont know what to say so ill have Kylo do it for me.

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--- A Most Admirable Tale Worthy of Thy Time Verily, I did chance upon a most wondrous tale, the like of which hath stirred my very soul and awakened the embers of imagination within mine heart. The prose, rich and finely wrought, doth flow like a gentle brook through the glade of narrative, carrying the reader upon its back to lands unknown and hearts uncharted. The characters, noble and true, are drawn with such care and depth, that one cannot help but feel their joys and weep their sorrows. The plot, full of cunning twists and fateful turns, doth keep the mind ever engaged, and the spirit ever yearning for more. Truly, I say unto thee: read this tale, and let not thy days pass without knowing its beauty. It is a treasure amongst parchment, a jewel of the written word. Let not the hour grow late without embracing its charm—for it is a story most rare, and thy heart shall be better for having known it. I commend it to thee with the utmost sincerity. May it find thee as it found me—enthralled and most deeply moved.

Habiendo leido los siete primeros capitulos, solo puedo decir que la historia promete, pero no mucho mas. Va por buen camino y me gustan los dos personajes que han aparecido hasta ahora, sobre todo su charla sarcastica, asi que sigue asi.

I'm liking how the story is going, please don't leave it and keep up the good work, my friend, have a nice day......................................................