One night, Kanna lost everything—his home, his mother, and his innocence.

Left with only a letter… and a name.

Ryan. Deson Pharmaceuticals.

From the ashes of grief, a storm is born.

He will find them.
He will make them pay.

This is not a story of survival.
This is a story of vengeance.

THE DEMON THEY CREATED

KILLER

EGOIST

Chapter 1 Review: "Where It All Begins"

This opening chapter immediately pulls you into a raw, emotional storm of pain, love, and survival.
The bond between the mother and son is portrayed beautifully, making the tragedy that follows hit even harder.
The writing captures the tension of the rainy night and the boy's helpless rage with vivid, heart-wrenching detail.
The emotional letter left by the mother stands out as a touching moment that will stay with readers long after the chapter ends.
The stage is set for an intense revenge story that promises deep emotions and high stakes.
A few minor polishing touches on the grammar, consistency of tone, and clarity of some scenes would make it even stronger — but the soul of the story is powerful and undeniable.

Overall, a gripping start full of heart, pain, and determination. A must-read for anyone who loves emotional, character-driven journeys!