The Cyborg System
Lenny, an orphan from the Sector 41 slums, suddenly finds himself in possession of a rare and unknown affinity. It allows him to upgrade himself, using energy acquired from spirit beasts. But will he gain enough power to defend himself against those with every advantage he has never known?
Explore the Western Alliance, where the Four Pillars rule supreme, and all vie for the title of the strongest faction. But when those sworn to protect the people fight amongst themselves, who will save them from the biggest threat they've ever known? And can one young boy, with no family and a handful of friends, survive that chaos?
Stylistically, this is My Vampire System meets A Song of Ice and Fire. If that sounds like your thing, check out The Cyborg System.
This was non-stop stimulating entertainment for me. The writer passionately possesses the capacity to create world full of expansive lore. I cannot wait to read more future content. The in-depth detail paints a picture so well that I envision this having a video game or tv show adaptation. A thrilling treat for sci-fi lovers.
A wonderful piece of work! There are very refreshing concepts especially with Lenny's power and system, and the world is promising and fascinating. Also, I love that there are snippets of scenes involving side characters, which really adds to the depth of the story. Furthermore, it is really well written (I can tell the author is fluent in English) with little mistakes here and there. My only suggestion is that Mr. Author shorten few of the paragraphs, especially the long ones, into two to three paragraphs. Presented by a huge wall of text is somewhat intimidating and exhausting to look at. But this is just a preference. Anyways, Overall, fantastic work!
Honestly, I don't like the book , I love it. Everything is on point, the writing did a great job creating this vivid description, where we the readers get to imagine the whole story effortlessly . I am not a fan of Cyborg novels but even I am impressed. Will definitely keep reading . I left you a vote so you know how much I love it
Can't wait for more. Mother Mercy is a great character!
I loved this story, a very strong start! Can't wait to continue reading on and I'm looking forward to reading more of their stuff :).
The book is one of a kind, very different from the usual sci-fi. I like what you did here, keep it up author.
Great start. Nice momentum. the suspense are well build in the right place at the right timing! world development is flawlessly written! The character introduction and emotions blends smoothly. This is classis example of good read novel! A story thats makes you keep reading! Well i'm gonna keep reading! great job author!
the story is Great giving me cinematic vibes.. though I think this is more likely to be a Tv-series or Movie. if it's gets adaptation! the writing can be confusing at first . with how the system and the Mc dialogue using the same " ".. Keep it up author!!🔥
A strong start, immersive worldbuilding, and a unique system. The pacing is tight, dialogue feels natural, and mystery builds smoothly. It hooks well and promises depth. Great blend of street-level realism and fantasy. I'll definitely add it to my collection and continue reading it in my free time...
Planned to stop at chapter 5... now I'm 11 chapters deep, emotionally invested, and questioning my life choices. This is too good. Definitely adding it to my collection, need to come back later.
Oh! You want to expand your vocabulary? Read this novel! Oh! You want action? READ THIS NOVEL! The author will play with your imagination and will challenge your vocabulary! He'll leave you breathless and feeling dumb. It's FIRE. 🔥🔥🔥 I admit I'm still at the first two chapters, but I can't help but to leave an early review. I feel like my excitement won't go away until I do. Feels like I'm watching a movie like Terminator meets Da Vinci Code and that french parkour movie District 13 with a pinch of Solo Levelling. 😂 it may not be apt as comparison but the feelings I had when I watch those was the same. Good job author!
So, I'm not a big reviewer to be honest, but I started this novel with the intention of also getting other things done today around the house. After hours of reading I've finished the novel and I've done literally nothing else since beginning it! Which is a mega plus for the novel and a big minus for my house. The world building is fantastic and there's action right from the get-go which I love. Also, the dialogue is top notch and the side characters throughout keep it interesting and make it more rounded.. I can't wait for more chapters!
It is a very good . With a good pacing and character development.
Dear Readers, I would encourage you to try this gem, my goodness it's so good, from the character design to the world building everything is just superb, I would encourage Scif-fi book lovers to try this.
I like how you've managed to layer out everything based on your world, without rushing...which is exceptionally great if you ask me. Keep it up