The Cyborg System

Can't wait for more. Mother Mercy is a great character!

This was non-stop stimulating entertainment for me. The writer passionately possesses the capacity to create world full of expansive lore. I cannot wait to read more future content. The in-depth detail paints a picture so well that I envision this having a video game or tv show adaptation. A thrilling treat for sci-fi lovers.

Great start. Nice momentum. the suspense are well build in the right place at the right timing! world development is flawlessly written! The character introduction and emotions blends smoothly. This is classis example of good read novel! A story thats makes you keep reading! Well i'm gonna keep reading! great job author!

I loved this story, a very strong start! Can't wait to continue reading on and I'm looking forward to reading more of their stuff :).

The book is one of a kind, very different from the usual sci-fi. I like what you did here, keep it up author.

A wonderful piece of work! There are very refreshing concepts especially with Lenny's power and system, and the world is promising and fascinating. Also, I love that there are snippets of scenes involving side characters, which really adds to the depth of the story. Furthermore, it is really well written (I can tell the author is fluent in English) with little mistakes here and there. My only suggestion is that Mr. Author shorten few of the paragraphs, especially the long ones, into two to three paragraphs. Presented by a huge wall of text is somewhat intimidating and exhausting to look at. But this is just a preference. Anyways, Overall, fantastic work!

the story is Great giving me cinematic vibes.. though I think this is more likely to be a Tv-series or Movie. if it's gets adaptation! the writing can be confusing at first . with how the system and the Mc dialogue using the same " ".. Keep it up author!!🔥

A strong start, immersive worldbuilding, and a unique system. The pacing is tight, dialogue feels natural, and mystery builds smoothly. It hooks well and promises depth. Great blend of street-level realism and fantasy. I'll definitely add it to my collection and continue reading it in my free time...

Planned to stop at chapter 5... now I'm 11 chapters deep, emotionally invested, and questioning my life choices. This is too good. Definitely adding it to my collection, need to come back later.

Kudos to the writer on this one, got hooked from chapter one. The fighting scenes make me feel like I’m right there watching them 😍. The book gives me superhero movie vibe, it would be fire 🔥 if adapted

Totally worth a read 💯. Keep it up author