The New Worlds Order
Author: Hunter_Brecheisen
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Ben is a young man with hopes to escape his and his friends fate as a sacrifice, but his plans soon change when something unexpected hits his community. Chaos and disaster reshapes his life as he fights with and against god, monster, and ,other people to save his friends
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The concept looks solid, but you need to edit out the spelling and grammar mistakes . Discribe the surroundings of your characters , and make us know them better by discribing their feeling. Reach out to native english speakers , or just ai, and make the structure of the sentences better. Don't give up on your ideas