The Heroine is My Stepsister, and I'm her Final Boss

It was going great initially but too much nonsense and poetic descriptions loosing out quality.

I read all 28 chapters today. The pace is really good. The MC has a system but it is not the novel's focus, which is refreshing. I appreciate the fact that all characters seem to have varied personalities and goals. It's a great read

don't drop it bro. I finally found some nice shit to read.

Whoops, almost forgot—shameless author review time! Look, I’ve got nothing fancy to say, so just give this WebNovel a spin. You know the drill: follow the sacred three-chapter rule! Read the first three chapters, and if you’re hooked (spoiler: you will be), toss it in your library and keep reading. Drop some comments, maybe a 5-star review (wink, wink), and just… enjoy the ride!

it is a well written story. And i personally love to read it. its best quality ( in my openion ) is that it does not feel discontinued with any new ch. It has immense potential and i hope author will keep it up and make maximum ch for it without dropping. Well thats it.

I'm enjoying this story as part of my daily reads. Keep up the good work, I will be voting for more updates!

A little more context regarding the world itself and some more hinting of character motivations would be nice, but that's about it in terms of criticism. You've managed to sidestep the normal consequences that the numerous red flags typically lead to, which has turned what would normally be some filler trash to stave off boredom between the wait for better novels to update into some genuine quality work. Keep up the good work, author.

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This is what they called a hidden gem💎. Even though it's slow-paced, I kind of like this novel because at least it has some story to tell, unlike other junkes I see in this app.

I want MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE. Five or Six daily uploads, 😛😛😛. Author kun. Do whatever it takes, I’m gonna spend my vacation reading this novel.

Love the world and power system. Pacing is really quick. Too many poetic descriptions. The women fall in love way too fast. Great novel, but I think it would benefit from long character arcs. (I need more of Sansa)

Bro story is good but mc is still feels pathetic just scaredy cat that is the point i hate about transmigrated mc with system give him backbone and what's the point of saving statement points rather than using it

keep up the work....... moreee ...........

Its really hard to give a Review, with only 28 chapter or pages. But when i need to tell how i liked it so far, i can only say, Surprisingly Good. (Really) maybe more info dumping. I hope it gets to 50 chaps and i'm excited for the future of this Book.