Through Wands and War:A Wizards Life
In a world teetering on the brink of darkness, Marcus Starborn—an orphaned pure-blood wizard with a mysterious lineage—is accepted into Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry in the year 1931. Raised in the shadow of a crumbling manor and haunted by fragmented memories, Marcus steps into the magical world not only to uncover his past, but to forge his destiny.
As political tensions simmer across Europe and whispers of dark magic begin to stir, Marcus finds himself entangled in a secret war brewing beneath the surface of wizarding society. At Hogwarts, he discovers friendship, rivalry, and a hidden legacy that ties him to powerful forces shaping the future. But with each passing year, the threat of a rising dark order looms ever closer.
With ancient prophecies resurfacing and the lines between ally and enemy blurring, Marcus must decide what kind of wizard he will become—before the coming storm swallows the world.
no chapters on Sundays and Saturdays and plz give power stones
Too much inform dump, to many details for a fantasy and fictional knowledge and little character interactions. I skipped many paragraphs and even chapters.
before you complain about anything just know this is my first story and English is my second language
Dear author, you need to pay more attention to the chapters you upload, you use artificial intelligence and there are many problems with the book, in the 2nd year the hero's monologue, he is already 17 years old and he describes events that have not happened yet, many paragraphs are full of nonsense about his house, runes, etc. This is in the future, and he describes when he was only 13 years old, it seems that you are an inattentive person who just uploads chapters and all that. The development of the character and goals of the main character of the book is strange, he just decided out of nowhere, so it is not explained why he needs to rebuild the society of magicians and everything else, he is more like some kind of program, so there are so many problems, I am just too lazy to describe it, or the author is too lazy to read his book for the normal release of chapters for readers.
Overall, so far it’s been going pretty good. I really enjoyed the development so far, I wish there’s a little more character development and personality build up a bit more. But still, I find this story enjoyable. I also wished you put the characters appearances to built up more immersion for this story.
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I think it’s going good so far, the pacing is a bit slow, and I feel like there should be a more slice of life elements to balance out his training and studying. And the interactions between characters is sometimes a bit lacking… I suggest that you could have a longer chapters to add a bit more depth and detail you the environment and the story. I also recommend having a bit more human expressions. If you want, I could help you make a book cover. I also wonder what the MC and others looks like, as I wish you had an auxiliary to put on your character’s appearancs.
the story is ok the grammar could use a lot of work however overall its a decent story.